Last working day before Tet holliday
I am so excited because I am going to go home to night. Tomorrow, I can meet my relatives, especially my parents. ^^, ohoh, I am waiting for that. This year is the first time I come home at such a late time as the workers schedule( I just graduated, and this is my first job), so that I would not be able to help my family prepare for the Tet as I used to do. My family have our own store. There for, we have needed to sell things till the last day of the years, that was the reason why we were always busy at this period.
Oh oh, I dont want to work any more, I just want to jump in to the train and come home.I could not concentrate on my work because there are such a lot of things are dancing in my brain. Calm down,Thanh. ^^. I think, it might be better if I write some things about Tet.
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Before Tet holiday, there are 3 things we always need to do, they are: Cleaning house, making "Chung cakes" and "Decorating house".
Come to the first one, this is the most horrible work I have ever do! As the 1st floor is the place we put all goods to sell, and those things were always messed at these days. We used to take a week to finish it, and that is only ended till New year's Eve . I have cried many times because of this work.
With the second one, we have always made our own "Chung cakes" to eat and use as the gifts. All my family members are Chung cake lovers, so that we used to make double than other family (about 25 peaces , and 1 kg each). Whereas my father is the best Chung cake maker, I am the worst one. ^^ (My skill is even worse than my younger brother :( )
Now is the last one, this is my favorite part, I love shopping. But, I dont have any chance to do it, because my brother loves it either :(. I need to be yielding. ^^. We often buy flowers, flash- lights, wine, trees among others at 29th or 30th of moon calender.
Hi hi. That's all for to day. ^^. I will share more in the next writing. Hope you can help me correct it.^^.Thank you so much.
I'm Sandy.
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Last working day before Tet holiday
I am so excited because I am going to go back to my childhood home to night tonight. Tomorrow, I can meet will get to see my relatives, especially my parents. We usually only "meet" people once. I met my girlfriend 5 years ago. I see her every day. ^^, ohoh, I am waiting for that. This year is the first time I come home at such a late time as the workers schedule( I just graduated, and this is my first job), so that I would not be able to help my family prepare for the Tet as I used to do. I just graduated and got my first job, and sadly, my work schedule requires me to work until just before Tet: I'll be going home much later this year than I've ever done before, and won't be able to help my family prepare as I used to. My family have our has its own store. There for Therefore, we have always needed to sell things till the last day of the years, that was the reason why and thus we were always busy at this periods.Oh oh, I dont want to work any more, I just want to jump in to on the train and come go home. You "come" to where you are right now; you "go" anywhere else. I could can not concentrate on my work because there are such a lot of things are dancing in my brain. Since you said "there are", you don't need a second "are" Calm down,Thanh. ^^. I think, it might be better if I write some things about Tet.
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This is my last day of work before the New Year.
I am so excited because I am going home tonight. I can't wait to see my relatives tomorrow, especially my parents. I haven't been able to help my family get ready for the new year this year. I recently graduated and am working at my first job. Due to my schedule, I am going home later than usual.
My family owns a store.
Last working day before Tet holliday
Oh oh, I dont want to work any more, I just want to jump in to the train and come home.I could not concentrate on my work because there are such a lot of things are dancing in my brain. Calm down,Thanh. ^^. I think, it might be better if I write some things about Tet.
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Before Tet holiday, there are 3 things we always need to do, they are: Cleaning house, making "Chung cakes" and "Decorating house".
Come to the first one, this is the most horrible work I have ever do! As the 1st floor is the place we put all goods to sell, and those things were always messed at these days. We used to take a week to finish it, and that is only ended till New year's Eve . I have cried many times because of this work.
With the second one, we have always made our own "Chung cakes" to eat and use as the gifts. All my family members are Chung cake lovers, so that we used to make double than other family (about 25 peaces , and 1 kg each). Whereas my father is the best Chung cake maker, I am the worst one. ^^ (My skill is even worse than my younger brother :( )
Now is the last one, this is my favorite part, I love shopping. But, I dont have any chance to do it, because my brother loves it either :(. I need to be yielding. ^^. We often buy flowers, flash- lights, wine, trees among others at 29th or 30th of moon calender.
Hi hi. That's all for to day. ^^. I will share more in the next writing. Hope you can help me correct it.^^.Thank you so much.
I'm Sandy.
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Before the Tet holiday, there are 3 things we always need to do, they which are: Cleaning house, making "Chung cakes" and "Decorating house".
Come to As for the first one, this is the most horrible work I have ever had to do! As The 1st floor is the place we put all goods to sell, and those things were always always got messed up at these days before Tet. We used to take a week to finish cleaning it, and that is it only ended till on New year's Eve . I have cried many times because of this work.
With the second one, we have always made our own "Chung cakes" to eat and use as the gifts. All my family members are Chung cake lovers, so that we used to make double than twice as much as other family families (about 25 peaces , and 1 kg each). Whereas my father is the best Chung cake maker, whereas I am the worst one. ^^ (My skill is even worse than my younger brother :( )
Now is The last one, this is my favorite part: I love shopping. But, I dont have any chance to do it, because my brother loves hates it either I don't like it, and my brother doesn't like it either:(. I need to be yielding. ^^. We often buy flowers, flashlights, wine, trees among others at and other things on the 29th or 30th of the moon lunar calender.
Hi hi. That's all for to day. ^^. I will share more in the next writing. Hope you can help me correct it.^^.Thank you so much.
I'm Sandy.
Come to As for the first one, this is the most horrible work I have ever had to do! As The 1st floor is the place we put all goods to sell, and those things were always always got messed up at these days before Tet. We used to take a week to finish cleaning it, and that is it only ended till on New year's Eve . I have cried many times because of this work.
With the second one, we have always made our own "Chung cakes" to eat and use as the gifts. All my family members are Chung cake lovers, so that we used to make double than twice as much as other family families (about 25 peaces , and 1 kg each). Whereas my father is the best Chung cake maker, whereas I am the worst one. ^^ (My skill is even worse than my younger brother :( )
Now is The last one, this is my favorite part: I love shopping. But, I dont have any chance to do it, because my brother loves hates it either I don't like it, and my brother doesn't like it either:(. I need to be yielding. ^^. We often buy flowers, flashlights, wine, trees among others at and other things on the 29th or 30th of the moon lunar calender.
Hi hi. That's all for to day. ^^. I will share more in the next writing. Hope you can help me correct it.^^.Thank you so much.
I'm Sandy.
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