Hi I'm Miiya
I live in Beijing. I'm working in a Sweden company, my boss is a German, and some colleagues from different conturies. So I would like to improve my spoken English that can communicate well with my partners. And I'd like to make new friends from different culture here, we can share our stories, practise our language and progress together.
In the life, I like work out and cook some healthy food myself. But you know, most of the healthy food are not that tasty, so I try to set them looks good, that can make me happy when I eat them. I share the pictures on the moments of wechat every morning, many friends like my breakfast. That engaged me a lot, I have kept cooking a year, and I think I will keep on going.
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Hi I'm Miiya
I live in Beijing. I'm working in a Swedish company. My boss is a* German, and some colleagues are from different countries. So, I would like to improve my spoken English that can communicate well with my partners. And I'd like to make new friends from different cultures. Here, we can share our stories, practise our language and progress (grow is a better word) together.In the my everyday life, I like to work out and cook some healthy food for myself. But you know, most of the healthy foods are not that tasty, so I try to set them [in a way that looks/so that they look] good. That can make me happy** when I eat them. I share the pictures on the moments on WeChat every morning. Many of my friends like my breakfasts. That engaged me a lot. I have kept cooking for a year, and I think I will keep on going.
*You can also say 'my boss is German' if you want to sound more natural.
**If it only makes you happy sometimes, your sentence is fine. But, if it always makes you happy, you would say 'that makes me happy when I eat them/it.
Your message is clear, which is great. I would recommend making sure to remember to use plurals and to remember to start new sentences more often.
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Hi I'm Miiya
I live in Beijing. I'm working in a Swedish company, my boss is German, and some colleagues are from different countries. So I would like to improve my spoken English so that I can communicate well with my partners. And I'd like to make new friends from different cultures here, we can share our stories, practise our language and progress together.In life, I like to work out and cook some healthy food myself. But you know, most healthy food is not that tasty, so I try to make them look good, so that it makes me happy when I eat them. I share the pictures of these moments on wechat every morning, many friends like my breakfast. That engaged me a lot, I have been cooking for a year, and I think I will keep on going.
Hello Miiya,
Nice intro, just a few small corrections.
Well done.
Bob
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Hi I'm Miiya
I live in Beijing. I'm working in a Sweden company, my boss is a German, and some colleagues from different countries. So I would like to improve my spoken English so that i can communicate well with my partners. And I'd like to make new friends from different culture here we can share our stories, practice our language and progress together.In daily life, I like work out and cook some healthy foods. But you know, most of the healthy foods are not tasty, so I try decorate them to look good, that can make me happy when I eat them. I share the pictures of the moments on wechat every morning, many of friends like my breakfast. That engaged me a lot, I have been cooking for a year, and I think it will go even further.
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