Analysing the Internet
The Internet, a big company that has been introduced in our lives more and more. What would we do without an Internet connexion at home? Is the Internet connecting people or just distancing us from the others?
First of all, it is important to analyse the advantages it provides us everyday. Who hasn't a missing friend living far from us and the only way to know anything about him is by taking a look to his Facebook account? Or are you that person who searches on Google the meaning of a word? Besides, the Internet could be seen as a very useful tool for people who don't have enough time to go shopping or just calling a friend. Just one click away and we are able to shop anything whenever we desire. Isn't that appealing to you?
Otherwise, there is a serious concern in the amount of time people spend in front of a computer screen, specially those who have a computer-based job. Considering the Internet as the only way to get away from daily routines might not be the best solution. We all already know the importance to stay fit, to communicate our ideas face-to-face, to leave home for a while and
enjoy some fresh air.
By and large, Internet is a powerful tool for us to do anything we want to at the time we choose. But please be aware of the risks that takes the Internet overuse as it could become an addiction at some point in your life. Please, use it carefully and live your live to the full.
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Analysing the Internet
The Internet is a big company that has been is being introduced into our lives more and more. What would we do without an Internet connexion connection at home? Is the Internet connecting people or just distancing us from each other the others?First of all, it is important to analyse the advantages it provides us everyday. Who doesn't miss a hasn't a missing friend living far from us, and the only way to know anything about them him is by taking a look at their to his Facebook account? Or are you that person who searches on Google for the meaning of a word? Besides, the Internet could be seen as a very useful tool for people who don't have enough time to go shopping or just calling a friend. Just one click away and we are able to shop anything whenever we desire. Isn't that appealing to you?
On the other hand Otherwise, there is a serious concern about in the amount of time people spend in front of a computer screen, especially those who have a computer-based job. Considering the Internet as the only way to get away from daily routines might not be the best solution. We all already know the importance to of staying fit, to of communicating our ideas face-to-face, to of leaving home for a while and enjoying some fresh air.
By and large, Internet is a powerful tool for us to do anything we want to at the time we choose. But please be aware of the risks that takes the Internet poses overuse as it could become an addiction at some point in your life. Please, use it carefully and live your livfe to the full.
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