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This subject turned out to be a disappointment. From the first lecture I was demotivated for several reasons. Firstly, I was expecting a completely different knowledge from this subject. Also, it is worth noting that, in my view "intercultural" management should include a variety of the areas together and should not be overly abstract. Secondly, the teacher often was using academic terminology, which in turn evoked some antipathy to the subject. Moreover, in general, a method of teaching was very boring and monotonous, which caused only a great dislike. In this regard, I missed a lot of lectures, which influenced the results of the exam and caused demotivation in the future. I did not pass the exam and this was very much reflected in the subsequent study blocks.
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Can anyone assess this text please?
This subject(lecture) turned out to be a disappointment. From the first lecture I was demotivated for several reasons. Firstly, I was expecting a completely different knowledge(topic) from this subject. Also, it is worth noting that, in my view "intercultural" management should include a variety of the areas together and should not be overly abstract. Secondly, the teacher often was using academic terminology, which in turn evoked some antipathy to the subject. Moreover, in general, a the method of teaching was very boring and monotonous, which caused only a great dislike (me to dislike it). In this regard, I missed a lot of lectures, which influenced the results of the exam and caused demotivation in the future. I did not pass the exam and this was very much reflected in the subsequent study blocks.Dear Yury, You have mastered the English rhetorical style. You made a list and explained your points very clearly. Nice work! I put some other word choices in parentheses. Writing conclusions is difficult. I would rework the last two sentences. It seems to me, you have written that you did poorly on an exam, became unmotivated, and your disinterest was reflected in your later work. How awful! Keep writing in English, you have done a good job.
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