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After graduation, I became an officer in Government for two years. It was the first time I felt a strong responsibility to citizens in our country. Though I was not the one to make public policy, I believed everything I do should contribute to people’s lives. During that period I grew up really quickly not only professionally but also psychologically. I transformed from a fresh graduation to a professional in a short time by diligent work and gained the trust of the Director General. She appointed me as her assistant and that opportunity, in addition to professional skills, brought me a lot of valuable experience. I became more interpersonal through coordinating with various people - superiors, inferiors, colleagues and the public.
While to be an excellent leader, I need to broaden my international perspective and improve the management skills by attending an advanced business program. In the short run, I shall learn more specialized knowledge and convert it to my own advantage by putting theory into practice. In the long run, I believe that the globalization will get deeper and broader. The demand for international background professionals is increasing, so I dedicate to the deep communication among countries and aim to be a leader in transnational corporates.
After comparing various programs, I find this program in accordance with my goal. For one thing, the courses are experience-based and use case studies. Besides, the participation of active companies in related field will intensify practical application. I prefer this teaching mode in combination with respectful professors. Second, the powerful alumni network will provide a lot of benefits to my work and life. Moreover, the program facilitates my French learning. I expect to learn a different way of thinking and acquire a comprehensive understanding of responsible management from this program to boost my career. On the other hand, I will contribute to the program with my own thought and unique Chinese background.
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After graduation, I became an officer in the Government for two years. It was the first time I felt a strong responsibility to the citizens in our country. Though I was not the one to make public policy, I believed everything I did should contribute to people’s lives. During that period I grew up really quickly not only professionally but also psychologically. I transformed from a fresh graduate to a professional in a short time by diligent work and gaining the trust of the Director General. She appointed me to her assistant and that opportunity, in addition to professional skills, brought me a lot of valuable experience. I became more personablel through coordinating with various people - superiors, direct reports, colleagues and the public.To become an excellent leader, I need to broaden my international perspective and improve the management skills by attending an advanced business program. In the short run, I shall focus on learning more specialized skills and use them to my own advantage by putting theory into practice. In the long run, I believe that the globalization will get deeper and broader. The demand professionals with an international background is increasing, so I am dedicated to the deep communication among countries and aim to be a leader in transnational corporations.
After comparing various programs, I find this program is in accordance with my goal. For one thing, the courses are experience-based and use case studies. Besides that, the participation of active companies in related fields will improve my practical application. I prefer this teaching mode in combination with respectful professors. Second, the powerful alumni network will provide a lot of benefits to my work and life. Moreover, the program facilitates my French learning. I expect to learn a different way of thinking and acquire a comprehensive understanding of responsible management from this program to boost my career. Furthermore, I will contribute to the program with my own knowledge and unique Chinese background.
Notes: Try to avoid using the word inferiors when referring to people that work under you. This could can be seen as condescending. Well written, keep up the good work!
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