Doritos & Games International Party
Our goal is to make friends with other English speakers in our city!
We are trying to make such a good place for making a better life!
Doritos & Games International Party is a socialization party with Doritos snacks & Games.
Hope to see you there and get to know you more!!
【Participation Fee】
1,000yen
We will serve the Doritos snacks for each table and talk to you with while having the snacks and enjoying a game!
We will put a stamp on your hand so that you can get discounts when you order drinks.
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Doritos & Games International Party
Our goal is to make friends with other English speakers in our city!We are trying to make such a good place for making a better life!
A more natural way to write this would be 'we are trying to [create a good environment/make a good place] for making our lives better.' The grammar is all correct, though!
The/Our Doritos & Games International Party is a socialization party with Doritos snacks (the word, 'snacks,' is not needed) & Games.
Hope to see you there and get to know you more!!
This sentence is grammatically correct but I personally think that saying 'We hope to see you there and to get to know you more' would sound more natural.
【Participation Fee】
1,000yen
We will serve the Doritos snacks for each table and talk to you with while having the snacks and enjoying a game!
A more natural way to write this would be 'we will serve Doritos for each table and [talk to you/chat] while eating and enjoying a game.'
We will put a stamp on your hand so that you can get discounts when you order drinks.
Your grammar is really good! If you want, you can try and work on sounding a bit more natural but the message is clear.
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