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Tha Tokyo Olympic 2020 Volunteer Start The preparation for Tokyo Olympic Games for three years later have started. The reception was hold with an Rio Olympic bronze medalist and a person had joined volunteer of Rio Olympics today I'd like to participate in a sports volunteer and support a player and audience of Tokyo Olympic Games. Let's join together if you are interested in the sports volunteer. Please keep in touch me.

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Hi Yoshiyki, 

Reading your note, it seems to me that the greatest improvement you could make would be to revise prepositions and when to use articles (a, an, the). I hope that helps.


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The Tokyo Olympic 2020 Volunteer Start

The preparations for the Tokyo Olympic Games for three years later have started.
The reception was held with an a Rio Olympic bronze medallist and a person who had joined volunteered  of at the Rio Olympics joined today
I'd like to participate in as a sports volunteer and support a player and audience of in the Tokyo Olympic Games.
Let's join together if you are interested in the being a sports volunteer.
Please keep in touch with me.

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