The Spring Festival
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents.This money is given to children for good luck .People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”.People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest
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The Spring Festival
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It’s when to we celebrate the lunar calendar's new year. In the evening before the Spring Festival, families get together and have a big meal. In many places people like to set off firecrackers. Dumplings are the most traditional food. Children like enjoy the festival very much a lot, because they can have eat delicious food and wear new clothes.They can also get some money from their parents., Tthis money is given to children for good luck. People put New Year scrolls on the their walls for good fortune. The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long. People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes". People enjoy the Spring Festival, because during this time they can have a good rest.Hi Caiyulin! I like your article about Spring Festival - I live in China so understand how important it is!
I've corrected a few of your (minor) mistakes, here are a few:
Make sure your full stops and commas are directly after your sentences and words. For example (...important festival in China . / ...important festival in China. -- ...before the Spring Festival , / before the Spring Festival,)
Join sentences that talk about the same thing with commas. For example (from their parents. This money... / from their parents, this money...)
Proof read your sentences, to see if you could add or change anything. For example (Children like the festival very much / Children enjoy the festival a lot) Your sentence is correct, but adding or changing words can make it more fluent or readable.
I hope these suggestions will help you in the future. Happy Spring Festival!
David.
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