dialy I worked from 7am to 5pm. it was boring. It was hard to work against people. I feel many stressed. But I endured it for money. I thought it is hard to earn money. It was very cold in Japane yest

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dialy I worked from 7am to 5pm. it was boring. It was hard to work against people. I feel many stressed. But I endured it for money. I thought it is hard to earn money. It was very cold in Japane yesterday. I fell asleep when I got home. I was very tired and it was cold. I had an English conversation lesson on skype. I'm looking forward to it every week. I want to be able to speak English quickly.

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Diary

I worked from 7am to 5pm.
It was boring.
It was hard to work with difficult people.
I feel very stressed.
But I endured it for money.
I thought it is hard to earn money.
It was very cold in Japan yesterday.
I fell asleep when I got home.
I was very tired and it was cold.
I had an English conversation lesson on Skype
I'm looking forward to it every week.
I want to be able to speak English quickly.

Hi Masanao,

Just a few comments.

1. Skype is a proper noun (an official name of a software). We use capital letter "S".

2. We don't really say work against people. I am assuming you are referring to people who are making things difficult for you.

3. You cannot count stress. Stress is an uncountable nouns. So we say "very" instead of "many".

Hope this helps.

Cheers, Lance

dialy

I worked from 7am to 5pm.
It was boring.
It was hard to work against people.
I felt really stressed.
But I endured it for the money.
I thought it is hard to earn money.
It was very cold in Japan yesterday.
I fell asleep when I got home.
I was very tired and it was cold.
I had an English conversation lesson on skype.
I'm looking forward to it every week.
I want to be able to speak English soon.

dialy

I worked from 7am to 5pm.
it was boring.
It was hard to work against people.
I feel felt many very stressed.
But I endured it for the money.
I thought it is was hard to earn money.
It was very cold in Japane yesterday.
I fell asleep when I got home.
I was very tired and it was cold.
I had an English conversation lesson on skype.
I'm looking forward to it every week.
I want to be able to speak English quickly.

Thank you for your correction!

Excellent job, Masanao!

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