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My lovely room I’ve already finished university, started to work and now I’m living in my own apartment. There is no special design in the flat, but it is quite cozy, especially living room. The walls are pale cream, the door is lightwood and window frames are white. It’s quite big room with a huge old navy brown wardrobe along one wall and a full-length impressive picture on another one. Everybody, who comes to this room, can understand what I like the most and what preferences I have. For example, I like different types of music, so there are big black electronic concert piano and acoustic guitar near the window. In addition, I want to be closer to nature so I have many flowers in pots. I love changes and tries occasionally to change something in my room, but not very often. I prefer this room because I have plenty of space for my activities and creativity there.

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My lovely room

I’ve already finished university, started to work and now I’m living in my own apartment. There is no special design in the flat, but it is quite cozy, especially the living room. The walls are pale cream, the door is lightwood and the window frames are white.

It’s quite a big room with a huge old navy brown wardrobe along one wall and a full-length impressive picture on another one. Everybody who comes to this room can understand what I like the most and what preferences I have. For example, I like different types of music, so there is a big black electronic concert piano and acoustic guitar near the window. In addition, I want to be closer to nature so I have many flowers in pots.

I love change and I occasionally try to change something in my room, but not very often. I prefer this room because I have plenty of space for my activities and creativity there.
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My lovely room

I’ve already finished university, started to work and now I’m living in my own apartment. There is no special design in the flat, but it is quite cozy, especially the living room. The walls are pale cream, the door is light wood and the window frames are white.

It’s quite a big room with a huge old navy brown wardrobe along one wall and a full-length impressive picture on another one. Everybody, who comes to this room, can understand what I like the most and what preferences I have. For example, I like different types of music, so there are is a big black electronic concert piano and a acoustic guitar near the window. In addition, I want to be closer to nature so I have many flowers in pots.

I love changes and tries I try occasionally to change something in my room, but not very often. I prefer this room because I have plenty of space for my activities and creativity there here. [though your phrase is not grammatically incorrect, normally either "that" and "there" are used together or "this" and "here"; you could have also said "I prefer that room because I have plenty of space for my activities and creativity there."]
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haha, maybe a little bit :)
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You have discribed as if Bob Ross interpreting while he is painting [emoji]

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