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Thoughts of the night... I have wondered if someday I will find someone who I can trust on. Someone who I can share my life with, you know all those things. I know, I’m still young (I’m 26 years old) and I still have many people for know. I’m not looking for a guy; I’m just waiting for that guy, for that man who will change my life, who will help me to become a better person. I sometimes feel like if I have found that guy, I mean someone who I feel attract with for many things, although it’s not happens as often, it makes me feel scared because my experiences haven’t been good before and, I don’t want to be hurt again. On the other hand, I want to love someone! I want to be loved!

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Thoughts of the night...

I have wondered if someday I will find someone who I can trust ---. Someone whom I can share my life with, you know all those things. I know, I’m still young (I’m 26 years old) and I still have" to get to know" many people . I’m not looking for a guy. I’m just waiting for that guy, for that man who will change my life, who will help me to become a better person. I sometimes feel like if I "find" that guy, I mean someone who I feel attract "to" " because of" many things, although it "doesn't" "happen" as often, it makes me feel scared because my experiences haven’t been good before"," and I don’t want to "get" hurt again. On the other hand, I want to love someone! I want to be loved!
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Thoughts of the night...

I have wondered if someday I will find someone whom I can trust on. Someone with whom I can share my life with, you know all those things. I know, I’m still young (I’m 26 years old) and I still have many people for to know. I’m not looking for a guy; I’m just waiting for that guy, for that man who will change my life, who will help me to become a better person.

I sometimes feel like if I have found that guy, I mean someone who I feel attract with for many things, although it does not happens as often, it makes me feel scared because my experiences haven’t been good before and, I don’t want to be hurt again. On the other hand, I want to love someone! I want to be loved!

You have a good English. There are only minor errors. Wish you soon find a perfect partner! :) Good Luck!

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