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The walk in the town's streets Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, being on Green Island. Today I wasn't busy so I could walk without any goal. I decided to wander through the town, looking around. The dockyard was making some small details for ships. That's what I had noticed when I was walking in the port. Then I went to the centre. It was strange, but the forge was located right at the guild hall. I hadn't noticed it before. It was very sensibly as any citizen of Green Island knew how to fight. I respected them for their universalism. A plowman could use melee fighting, a first line elite warrior might be as a bowman if necessary, a mage could become a gunner. But every citizen was a professianal in his main work. That was the well organized mess (or jumble? what's the word better in this case?). When I came into my lodge, Lisa alredy was there. (I'm not sure that I chose the right tense here. I don't know how to say in this case). "So, what next?" "Tomorrow we'll go to train. But now let's do what we like." Lisa replied.

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The walk in the town's streets

Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, being on Green Island.  (This sentence confuses me...are you trying to set up the context for the following

Today I wasn't busy, so I could take a leisurely walk aimlessly. I decided to wander through the town, looking around. The While walking in the port, a saw the dockyard was making some small details for (maybe "repairs on" or "parts for"?) ships. That's what I had noticed when I was walking in the port. Then I went to the centre of town. It was strange, but the forge was located right at the guild hall. I hadn't noticed it before. It was very sensibly sensible as any citizen of Green Island knew how to fight. I respected the people of Green Island for their universalism  dual proficiencies. A plowman could use melee fighting, a first line elite warrior might be as a bowman if necessary, a mage could become a gunner, B but every citizen was a professianal in his main work. That It was the well organized chaos. (or jumble? what's the word better in this case?  I think that "chaos" might be the word you are looking for.). When I came walked into my lodge, Lisa already was there,  (I'm not sure that I chose the right tense here. I don't know how to say in this case  Your tense is fine... in common usage, it would likely be "Lisa was already there.").

"So, what next?", I asked.

"Tomorrow we'll go to train. But now let's do what we like." Lisa replied.

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