My reading yesterday
Yesterday I took a book named " La increíble y triste historia de la cándida Eréndira y su abuela desalmada" written by Gabriel García Márquez. He was a famous colombian writer. I read the first story of the book, named " Un señor muy viejo con unas alas enormes" ( A very old man with huge wings) and it tell about the man with wings that arrives to the garden of house of family. The family was terrified with the man, but they can not communicate with he, because the man with wings speaks in a strange language. However, the man with wings was not dangerous. The family consult with a neighbor and she told them, that the man was a angel...This story will continue...
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My reading yesterday
Yesterday I took a book named " La increíble y triste Historia de la cándida Eréndira y su abuela desalmada" written by Gabriel García Márquez. He was a famous Colombian writer. I read the first story of the book, named " Un señor muy viejo con unas alas enormes" ( A very old man with huge wings) and it about the man with wings who arrives the garden of the House of Family.The family was terrified, but they can not communicate with him because the man speaks the different language. However, the man was not harmful. The family contact with a neighbor and told them, the man was an angel...This story will continue...I only want you to correct me..thanks
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My reading yesterday
Yesterday I took a book named " La increíble y triste historia de la cándida Eréndira y su abuela desalmada" written by Gabriel García Márquez. He was is a famous Colombian writer. I read the first story of the book, named " Un señor muy viejo con unas alas enormes" ( A very old man with huge wings) and it tells about the man with wings that arrives to the garden of house of family. The family was terrified with the man, but they can not communicate with he him, because the man with wings speaks spoke in a strange language. However, the man with wings was not dangerous. The family consulted with a neighbor and she told them that the man was aan angel(Angel is generally associated with feminine gender...This story will continue...I only want you to correct me..thanks
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My reading yesterday
Yesterday I bought a book named " La increíble y triste historia de la cándida Eréndira y su abuela desalmada" written by Gabriel García Márquez. He was a famous Colombian writer. I read the first story of the book, "Un señor muy viejo con unas alas enormes" ( A very old man with huge wings) and** it tells about a man with wings who arrives in the garden of a family. The family is terrified of the man, but they cannot talk with him, because he speaks in a strange language. However, the man with wings is not dangerous. The family consult with a neighbor and she tells them that the man is an angel.** Starting here, I have put everything in the present tense. (Past tense only, or, Present tense only, or Confusion.)
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I only want you to correct me..thanks
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