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Who I'm My Name is Paola , I'm 20 years old , I live with my parents and my little dog in Brazil , I wanna improve my english because English is the most important language in the world , and I Want to be able to speak with any people

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Who I am

My Name is Paola. I'm 20 years old  and I live with my parents and my little dog in Brazil. I want to improve my english because English is the most important language in the world, and I Want to be able to speak with anyone. 


* contractions like I'm are generally used In longer sentences and avoided in titles.


*wanna- this is a spoken word but shouldn't be used in text form. 

*any people= anyone


its very well written, keep up the great work.



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Who I'm I am

My Name is Paola , I'm 20 years old , I live with my parents and my little dog in Brazil , I wanna improve my english because English is the most important language in the world , and I Want to be able to speak with any people  anyone


Very good, the only issue is the last part. You may have meant anyone or many people. In English, you need to write I am instead of I'm in that case.

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Hi Paola My name is Abel and I want to improve my English as well...this is my Skype [email protected] and this is my Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/abelqq and I'm PERU. I WANT TO PRACTICE MY SPEAKING SKILL WITH SOMEONE, IF YOU WANT TO. CONTACT ME AS SOON AS YOU CAN.

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