Could the Alhambra be considered a wonder of the world?
Hello! I am Nana and I am going to talk about the topic which has been chosen in this discussion forum: ‘The Eighth Wonder of the World’.
From my point of view, this worldwide privilege must be given to the Alhambra. It was built in the first half of 11th century.
This Arabic palace, which has received a great number of reforms along the time, rests on the edge of Sierra Nevada, in Granada, Spain.
I suggest you come and see it. It is so great and touching. Water and art are mixed in a combination of elegant, culture and timeless beauty.
Why would I choose this monument in first position?
1th The stones of its walls talks about legends and myths.
2th Poets and novels felt in love with those romantic and heroic adventures about sultans and princess, this is the case of Washington Irving and his Tales of the Alhambra.
3th Sunlight draws large, balance, golden and ageless reflections through its horseshoe arches and courtyards.
The Alhambra is eternal as eternal is its soul, by this, and because there isn’t anything on the earth, it deserves to be consider a world wonder.
If you come to Granada you will live a magical and passionate experience: It is called the Alhambra. Then, you will able to understand when the beauty and passion are born, where the moon projected images which conjure the power and the attraction of the immortality.
For all that, I take a chance on the Alhambra, a stately palace which is able to evocate the most unprecedented dreams.
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Could the Alhambra be considered a wonder of the world?
Hello! I am Nana and I am going to talk about the topic which has been chosen in this discussion forum: ‘The Eighth Wonder of the World’.From my point of view, this worldwide privilege must be given to the Alhambra. It was built in the first half of 11th century.
This Arabic palace, which has received a great number of reforms over time, rests at the edge of the Sierra Nevada, in Granada, Spain.
I suggest you come and see it. It is so great and touching. Water and art are mixed in a combination of elegance, culture and timeless beauty.
Why would I choose this monument in the first place?
1st The stones of its walls talks about legends and myths.
2nd Poets and novels felt in love with those romantic and heroic adventures about sultans and princesses, as was the case with Washington Irving and his Tales of the Alhambra.
3rd Sunlight draws large, balanced, golden and ageless reflections through its horseshoe arches and courtyards.
The Alhambra is eternal as eternal is its soul, by this, and because there isn’t anything like on the earth, it deserves to be consider a world wonder.
If you come to Granada you will experience magic and passion: It is called the Alhambra. Then, you will able to understand when the beauty and passion are born, where the moon projects images which conjure the power and the attraction of the immortality.
For all that, I take a chance on the Alhambra, a stately palace which is able to evoke the most unprecedented dreams.
I liked a lot of the phrases you used here to convey the magic of this place. Even if they weren't always perfect the mistakes were pretty small. Yellow changes are corrections. Greens changes are more like suggestions, meaning your grammar may have been okay but I tried to make it sound more natural. Red means I had trouble understanding the English so I didn't want to make any changes but if you try again or shared what you want to say in Spanish I would be happy to take a look.
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