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A report The aim of this report is to suggest ways of making a children's hospital a more pleasant place for children. General decor is not attractive to children. Firstly, I would recommend you to buy new good-looking furnitures and paint the walls to a bright colour such as orange and yellow. Secondly, It would be a good idea to place a TV in every unit. There are not enough toys and games for children. They have nothing to do all day and so they are really boring. For this reason, I would recommend to make a special place with toys, board and education games. The nurses are not really friendly with children and don't do their work really well. So I strongly recommend to employ the new nurses. All in all, I think that improved decor, new toys and games and employing new nurses will make the hospital a more pleasant place for children.

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The aim of this report is to suggest ways of making a children's hospital a more pleasant place for children.

THE General decor is not attractive to children. Firstly, I would recommend FOR you to buy new, good-NICE looking furnitures and paint the walls to a bright colour such as orange and yellow. Secondly, It would be a good idea to place a TV in every unit.

There are not enough toys and games for children. They have nothing to do all day and so they are really boring.BORED. For this reason, I would recommend to THAT YOU make a special place with toys, board GAMES and educationAL games.

The nurses are not really friendly with children and don't do their work really well. So I strongly recommend to THAT YOU employ the new nurses.

All in all, I think that improved decor, new toys and games and employing new nurses will make the hospital a more pleasant place for children.


GREAT JOB! :) 

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