A report
The aim of this report is to suggest ways of making a children's hospital a more pleasant place for children.
General decor is not attractive to children. Firstly, I would recommend you to buy new good-looking furnitures and paint the walls to a bright colour such as orange and yellow. Secondly, It would be a good idea to place a TV in every unit.
There are not enough toys and games for children. They have nothing to do all day and so they are really boring. For this reason, I would recommend to make a special place with toys, board and education games.
The nurses are not really friendly with children and don't do their work really well. So I strongly recommend to employ the new nurses.
All in all, I think that improved decor, new toys and games and employing new nurses will make the hospital a more pleasant place for children.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 1
0
A report
The aim of this report is to suggest ways of making a children's hospital a more pleasant place for children.THE General decor is not attractive to children. Firstly, I would recommend FOR you to buy new, good-NICE looking furnitures and paint the walls to a bright colour such as orange and yellow. Secondly, It would be a good idea to place a TV in every unit.
There are not enough toys and games for children. They have nothing to do all day and so they are really boring.BORED. For this reason, I would recommend to THAT YOU make a special place with toys, board GAMES and educationAL games.
The nurses are not really friendly with children and don't do their work really well. So I strongly recommend to THAT YOU employ the new nurses.
All in all, I think that improved decor, new toys and games and employing new nurses will make the hospital a more pleasant place for children.
GREAT JOB! :)
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
