please correct my essay^^ however, 2 years ago, i met professor Chun at a camp, called ‘Healing camp’ My first impression of him was like countless people who pass me by everyday. although he was smiling,i was very skeptical person. so i thought “there are a lot of smiling people but all is fake, aren’t they? “ at lunchtime, when i sat he ran and sat next to me. he asked me “what do i do? and what is my vision”. so i reflected confidence and answered “I will study abroad” then he nodded. i thought he is friendly and warm-hearted. there were his students. i heard that their life changed because of him. one was a preschool teacher who were used to work for 9 hours a day and were paid 1000 dollar per month and she became a cosmetic saleswoman. and now are paid 10000 a month and another one who were lyed on sofa for 6 months, eating only snacks because when she asked her dad that he is his work. he said that his work is mandatory. but she now running a start up company and one who goes to library everyday but her mind wanders most of the times. i am not better than they were used to be in the world, there are more people who think they have no problem and won’t fix it than who admit thier problem ..my life was like a drankard who want to walk straight but his feet goes to where he does not intend to.