Trip to Japan
I went to Japan with my parents at January 12th . We went to the Imperial Palace (the emperor lived) there are a lot of people running in the beautiful scenery there on the sidewalk outside the walls . Then we went to Ginza , there is very busy and I bought a piece of clothing . And we also went to AKIBA because I like Comic and Animation . And I bought a Garage Kit . I'm very happy .
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Trip to Japan
I went to Japan with my parents at on January 12th . We went to the Imperial Palace (was it Tokyo or Kyoto or Nara?) (where the emperor lived? had lived? lives?) there are a lot of people running strolling in the beautiful garden scenery there on the sidewalk outside the walls . Then we went to Ginza , there which is very busy and crowded and I bought a piece of some clothing . And We also went to Akiba because I like Comics and Manga and Anime Animation . And I bought a Garage Kit . I'm very happy .0
Trip to Japan
I went to Japan with my parents at on January 12th . We went to the Imperial Palace (where the emperor lived). There are a lot of people there running in the beautiful scenery there on the sidewalk outside the walls. Then we We then went to Ginza, there which is very busy and I bought a piece of clothing . We also went to AKIBA because I like Comics and Animation. I bought a Garage Kit. I'm very happy with it.Very good. Try not to repeat too many word like 'then' and 'and'. And try to avoid starting sentences with those words, if possible.
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