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I write a passage for this topic: Describe a time that you were waiting for something I can still remember when I was in preschool,there was a time I spent half a day waiting for my father to pick me up in the classroom with no one else.No teachers and no students,just me.That day my father dropped me at the school gate and left as usual.But then I found the door of classroom was locked, a guardian ,who saw me hovering there let me into the classroom and told me there was a special situation and that day was a holiday. And I must wait until my father pick me up.Most time in a daze and I really waited until that time like a stupid. Maybe you want to know why everyone but me knows that day was off school.Actually I was unwilling to go to school at that time.And the day before it ,I just cried and refused to go to school,so absolutely I had no idea my preschool would had a day off.I didn’t remember how I felt about it at that time but I find it very funny today.

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I write a passage for this topic: Describe a time that you were waiting for something

I can still remember when I was in preschool, there was one time I spent half a day waiting for my father to pick me up in the classroom with no one else.an empty classroom (sounds more natural) There were no teachers and no students, just me.That day my father dropped me at the school gate and left as usual, but then I found the door of classroom was locked. A guard ,who saw me hovering there, let me into the classroom and told me there was a special situation and that day was a holiday, and I must wait there until my father came to pick me up. Most time in a daze and I really waited until that time like a stupid. I was in a daze most of the time I was there, and really did just wait for my father to pick me up. I felt so stupid. 

Maybe you want to know are wondering (sounds better) why everyone but me knowsknew(past tense) that day was off schootthere was no school that dayl. Actually I was unwilling to go to school at that time.And The day before it ,I just cried and refused to go to school, so I absolutely I had no idea my preschool would had a had the day off. I didn’t don't (present tense)remember how I felt about it at that time, but I find it very funny today.


Be careful not to start a sentence with But or And, and watch out for verb tenses. Good job!


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