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Moana I watched a movie called Moana at theater, released by Walt Disney Pictures, animation feature flim. The film tells the story of Moana, who is such a strong-willed and curly hair girl and heir of the chief in her tribe. Her grandmother, Tala, who falls ill, tells her to set sail and she departs with her pet Heihei to find Maui. Maui is a demigod and has an ability to change him into a fish, bug, lizard and an eagle by his magical hook that allows him to transform. Moana and Maui set sail together to return the heart to Te fiti. After Moana restore her heart she gives a new canoe to Moana to return to her island and a new magical hook to Maui. I was trying to watch it without Korean subtitles but it was still hard to do. The movie are well directed, and has beautiful and dazzling scenes and anthemic songs. It was an absolute delight. Usually I go out of theater as soon as end credits appear. I stayed to listen to the songs until they were done though. It was a great time. Please correct my sentences. Thanks in advance :)

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Moana

I watched an animated movie called Moana in the theater, released by Walt Disney Pictures, animation feature flim. The film tells the story of Moana, who is such a strong-willed and curly haired girl and heir of the chief in her tribe. Her grandmother, Tala, who falls ill, tells her to set sail. and She departs with her pet Heihei to find Maui. Maui is a demigod and has the ability to change himself into a fish, bug, lizard and an eagle with his magical hook. that allows him to transform. Moana and Maui set sail together to return the heart to Te fiti. After Moana restores her heart, she gives a new canoe to Moana to return to her island and a new magical hook to Maui. I was trying to watch it without Korean subtitles but it was still hard to do. The movie is well directed and has beautiful and dazzling scenes with anthemic songs. It was an absolute delight. Usually, I leave go out of the theater as soon as the end credits appear. I stayed to listen to the songs until they were done though. It was a great time.

Please correct my sentences. Thanks in advance :)
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Moana

I watched an animated feature film called 'Moana' at the theater, released by Walt Disney Pictures. It tells the story of Moana, who is such a strong-willed and curly haired girl and heir to the chief of her tribe. Her grandmother, Tala, who falls ill, tells her to set sail to find Maui and she departs with her pet Heihei. Maui is a demigod and can change [himself] into a fish, bug, lizard or eagle by waving his magical hook. Moana and Maui sail together to return a heart to Tefiti. After Moana restores this heart to Tefiti she gives a new canoe to somebody to return to her island and a new magical hook to Maui. I was trying to watch it without Korean subtitles but it was still hard to do. The movie are well directed, and has beautiful and dazzling scenes and resounding songs. It was an absolute delight. Usually I leave the theater as soon as end credits appear, but this time I stayed to listen to the songs until they were done. It was a great time.

Please correct my sentences. Thanks in advance :)

Very well written!

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well written, with just a few small mistakes.

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