0118 - Describing a bedroom of a unknown showroom
Describing a bedroom of a unknown showroom
In this picture we can see a bedroom. But for me it's a showroom which it is showing how you can have a black bedroom before you have one. In this room there's a black floor, there's a black double bed, a beige night table, a lamp, a beige furniture. On the background there're two armchair and big windows, there's a black and grey curtain. A part of the wall is face brick type.
On the bed there're two people. One is a man and other is women. She is wearing a red shirt, a light grey skirt and a dark red high heels. He is wearing a white shirt, black pants, a black shoes. Both are looking at the laptop. He's pointing at the computer.
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0118 - Describing a bedroom of a unknown showroom
Describing a bedroom of a unknown showroomIn this picture we can see a bedroom. But for me it's a showroom which it is showing how you can have a black bedroom before you have one. In this room there's a black floor, there's a black double bed, a beige night table, a lamp, and beige furniture. In the background there are two armchairs and big windows, there's also a black and grey curtain. A part of the wall is face brick type.
On the bed there are two people. One is a man and other is women. She is wearing a red shirt, a light grey skirt and a dark red high heels. He is wearing a white shirt, black pants, and black shoes. Both are looking at the laptop. He's pointing at the computer.
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0118 - Describing a bedroom of a unknown showroom
Your writing is good, and communicates your thoughts in a reasonable manner. Your writing is advanced enough that a couple of my corrections were not based on hard and fast rules, but rather on how an adult English speaker would write the sentence. Feel free to message me if you have any questions. -J
Describing a bedroom display of a in an unknown showroom
In this picture we can see a bedroom, Bbut for me it's a showroom which it is showing how you can have a black bedroom before you have one. In this room there's a black floor, there's a black double bed, a beige night table, a lamp, a and beige furniture. On In the background there're are two armchairs, and big windows; there's one of the windows has a black and grey curtain. A part of One of the walls is faced with brick type.
On the bed there're are two people,. One is a man and other is a women. She The woman is wearing a red shirt, a light grey skirt and a dark red shoes with high heels. He The man is wearing a white shirt, black pants, a and black shoes. Both people are looking at the a laptop, and the man is He's pointing at the computer.
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