My first composition
This is my first time to write here.I hope that I can write something here every day,including my mood,my job,my life and so on.Hope to improve my english and at the same time know more friends.
First I'll introduce myself.My english name is ella.I'm a girl.Now I'm working in a software company as a software test engineer.I'm interested in english and like to chat with foreigners who speak english.My listening english and speaking english is poor.And I have a strong desire to improve it.My goal is to communicate with foreigners fluently!
Thank you!welcomes your comments and corrections!
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My first composition
This is my first time to write here. I hope that I can write something here every day about my mood, my job, my life and so on. I hope to improve my english and at the same time get to know more friends.First I'll introduce myself. My english name is Ella. I'm a girl. Now I'm working in a software company as a software test engineer. I'm interested in English and like to chat with foreigners who speak english. My listening and speaking skills are poor, but I have a strong desire to improve. My goal is to communicate fluently with English speakers!
Thank you! I welcome your comments and corrections!
(Nicely done. very few correction necessarry. I just want to point out that we like to see a spac after punctuation like comma (,) and period (.). -Eric)
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