18/1/17 Watch TV
I don't like to watch TV.
Sometimes I see youtube or old drama.
I heard there is a good documentary about cancer patient and death.
I saw it and cried.
The story was Mom worried her children till the moment of her death.
Why does people think of thank and precious when they have no time?
Why doesn't people enjoy something to small?
Thank god for I live and healthy.
But!!!! I scolded my son at evening because he couldn't turn on TV by himself.
When will I be adult?
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18/1/17 Watch TV
I don't like to watch TV.Sometimes I see youtube or an old drama. Note: the verb "watch" is probably better than "see" in this case, but the sentence is still correct and makes sense.
I heard there is a good documentary about a cancer patient and death.
I saw it and cried.
The story was Mom worried her children till the moment of her death. The story was about a Mom who worried for her children till the moment she died.
Why does people think of thank and precious when they have no time? Note: I can not understand this sentence so maybe try phrasing differently?
Why doesn't people enjoy something to small? Why don't people enjoy small things?
Thank god for I live and healthy. Thank god I am alive and healthy.
But!!!! I scolded my son at evening because he couldn't turn on TV by himself.However, I scolded my son this evening because he couldn't turn on the TV himself.
When will I be adult?
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