A sad story My farther tells me something that makes me in a low spirits .This afternoon, my grandma, a 80 years old man, is working on the farm.He is very industrious and independent,even though so o

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A sad story My farther tells me something that makes me in a low spirits .This afternoon, my grandma, a 80 years old man, is working on the farm.He is very industrious and independent,even though so old, he still keeps on working for his wife and his life.Two younger men who drive a motorcycle pass his farm and say hello to him. My grandpa is too old to have a good memory, he thinks the two are neighbors and say hello to them. The two youngers say they will go to my uncle’s home and want to carry grandpa to there together. The two let my grandpa sit on the motorcycle in the middle of them . But when they are ready to drive. They give some reasons to let grandpa get off. After the two leave, grandpa finds that the money in his pocket are lost. He works one year to earn this money, and readys for the coming spring festival.I can imagine how sad my grandpa! The two cheaters are so hateful ！

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A sad story

My father tells me something that makes me sad. This afternoon, my grandpa, an 80 year old man, is working on the farm. He is very industrious and independent. Even though very old, he still keeps on working for his wife and his living. Two young men riding a motorcycle pass his farm and say hello to him. My grandpa is too old to have a good memory, he thinks the two are neighbors and says hello to them. The two youngers say they will go to my uncle’s home and offer/want to give grandpa a lift there. The two let my grandpa sit between them on the motorcycle. But when they are ready to drive, they give some excuse to let grandpa get off. After they leave, grandpa finds that the money in his pocket is gone. He works one year to earn this money, and it is ready for the coming spring festival. I can imagine how sad my grandpa was! The two cheaters/tricksters are so hateful ！

Very well written!

A sad story

My farther father tells told me something that makes me in a low spirits lowered my spirit.

This afternoon, my grandma grandpa, an 80 years old man, is was working on the farm.He is very industrious and independent., even Even though so he is old, he still keeps on working for his wife and his life is still hardworking.

Two younger men who drive driving a motorcycle pass came to his farm and say hello to greeted him. My grandpa is too old to have a good memory, he thinks thought the two are were neighbors and say said hello to them. The two youngers say they will go men said they were going to my uncle’s home and want offered to carry grandpa to there together take granpa along. The two let my grandpa sit on the motorcycle in the middle of them They sat my granpa on the motorcycle in between them. But when they are ready were about to drive., They give they suddenly gave some reasons excuse to let grandpa and grandpa had to get off.

After the two leave left, grandpa finds realized that the money in his pocket are lost was gone. He works worked one year to earn this money, and readys for the coming spring festival. I can can't imagine how sad my grandpa is! The two cheaters are so hateful ！

Very sad story. Did this really happen? :(
Great job by the way!

Thank you! It is so kind of you.

Thanks. I think family members will help him to pull through.

It's a really sad story. I hope that your grandpa will be okie soon [emoji][emoji]

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