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The balanced life between Work and leasure time.
Recently I have been thinking about this topic over the last couple of months. Actually I bet it's impossible in Korea which is the country around the clock. People work from 8AM to 6AM sometimes overwork until late at night for thier bread and butter. Surely if someone works hard and follow thier goal but I come to the point to think " Would it be really improtant live in that way" ?. I was one of them to make my reputation on the top. Studying in the classroom and after studying with my personal tutor cost my mum an arm and a leg. About uni where I went to, I have never satisfy with it cause the question " Which university have you gone to?" is the question what I don't want to be asked. It was like the tag following me all the time. I ended up not being happy and skeptical of all my life. Now I am facing a very important decision in my life. To make money, the best solution is join a company but need to work a lot. I won't have much of free time though. If I keep travelling, I will end up being poor, but at least I will laugh a lot and be happy. The weakness of this one is I can not live my life in this way for longer..
Probably so many people worry about those questions. I will be appriciated if you give me your ideas as well!
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Please correct me !
The balanced life between work and leisure time.Over the last couple of months I have been thinking about this topic. Actually, I bet a work : leisure balance is impossible in Korea which lives around the clock. People work from 8AM to 6AM, sometimes working overtime until late at night for their bread and butter. (Surely if someone works hard and follows their goal but I come to the point to think?) "Is it really important to live that way?" I was one of those people trying to make my reputation on the top. Studying in the classroom and then studying with my personal tutor cost my mum an arm and an arm. I was never satisfied with my university because the question " Which university have you gone to?" is a question that I don't want to be asked. It was like a tag following me all the time. I ended up being unhappy and skeptical about my life. Now I am facing a very important life decision. To make money the best solution is to join a company but one needs to work a lot. I won't have much free time. If I keep travelling, I will end up being poor, but at least I will laugh a lot and be happy. The weakness of this choice is that I cannot live my life in this way for very long.
Probably so many people worry about those questions. I will be appreciative if you give me your ideas as well!
Very well written!
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I love your story's life and somehow I feel some of the things that you facing right now is similar to my situation before. So, I decided to drop a few lines here. I hope you don't mind. Anyways, I have been in Sydney for almost two years by working holiday's visa. During that 2 years, I have worked some different types of jobs, travelled many places, and have met a lot of incredible people along the way, and I understand about how much different between working environment and life in Asian and western's culture. I feel like its more freedom and less stressful compared to my own country. It's hard to express the feeling in words but I believe that we may feel some of the things in the same way. In general, travelling, meeting new people, working different jobs somehow will make us clear about what we in our life. In short, I hope you are able to make a good choice for yourself, follow your heart and passions.
P/S I wish I could correct your writing but my English's level is not better than you
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