The village. Part 2. Chapter 4. "We begin". Correct my mistakes, please
The first training in the season was hard. We hadn't the decent condition to run so long distance. But I was worried by another problem. Only four days left until the first game at the season, but we were only five. The others hadn't returned from the vacation yet. Next day captain prepared the training with a ball for us.
"Well, guys! One more dickhead has been back to the Motherland." Said cap.
"I returned FROM my Motherland" Paul said.
"Shut up, barfly!" Tommy said.
"Look who is talking!" Paul said.
"Crappy commy! Have you danced with your drunken bears?" Tom barked.
I didn't want listeninig to these two clowns who liked to booze more than any other one in our team. We could fail the start of the season, but they were be abble to joke all day long.
"Close your mugs! Both!" Cap said. "Today we'll try to get the playing training if you've drunk away your mind"
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The village. Part 2. Chapter 4. "We begin". Correct my mistakes, please
The first training in of the season* was hard. We were out of shape and could not run long distance, but I was worried about another problem.We hadn't the decent condition to run so long distance. But I was worried by another problem. Only four days left until the first game at of the season, we only had five players; the other members of the team hadn't returned from the vacation yet. The n Next day, captain prepared the training with a ball for us."Well, guys! One more dickhead has been back to the Motherland." Said cap.
"I returned FROM my Motherland" Paul said.
"Shut up, barfly!" Tommy said.
"Look who is talking!" Paul said.
"Crappy commy! Have you danced with your drunken bears?" Tom barked.
I didn't want listeninig to these two clowns who liked to booze more than any other one else on the in our team. We could fail the start of the season, but they were be abble to joke all day long(I don't understand.. Here's what I think: The start of the season could be bad, but they were able to joke all day).
"Close your mugs! Both!" Cap said. "Today we'll try to train get the playing training if you have not drunken your mind away"
Hi
*In the US, we write/say of the instead of In. In the US, the preposition in is used to describe, location, direction, and movement. For example, In the US or In the closet, Inside the house, in that room, in that direction, etc . This is also for the preposition "at"... It's a difference between US and UK English
However,
Excellent Job
Nicole
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