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A memory from two years ago December, 23rd of 2014 was one of the most exciting days of my life. I wasn't feeling good on that day, I was fed up with my life and the people around me. Then I received my money and I invited my friends to hang out with me, we decided to go to a sushi restaurant an hour away from my home. My mom was at work and I called her to say that I was going to go out. When I got there, no one has arrived, as always, I am the first one to get. I waited them for 10 minutes and they all arrived at the same time. It was early and the sushis wasn't ready yet, so we had to wait some minutes till it get done. We talked about the school, relationships and about university. I was trying to forget all bad things in my life. I served myself with ten sushis, they were gorgeous and I wolfed them down quickly cause I was starving. At the moment all of us finished our meal we had only one option that was to go home but I wasn't feeling like to go home, my night was missing emotion. Me and three of my friends decided to go to a mall near the sushi restaurant, the is full of stores, restaurants, pubs, leisure spaces, outdoor fields and even an amusement park. But the reason I got there was to have some alcohol. That was terrifying, I have never had alcohol before. We entered in the pub, there were two skin waitress and a man( the bartender), the pub was dark, with British-rock-band pictures on the walls, so many young people(but no one as young as us), I felt like I was in Liverpool for one moment. We sat at a table and we ordered four caipifrutas with different flavors, a traditional drink of my country, that was the only proof that I really was in Teresina, Brazil. The waitress was gazing us with a suspicious look, she get next to the counter where the other waitress was eagerly standing and they starting arguing something. The other waitress with a creepy face got at us requiring to see our identity cards, cause she thought we were too young to be drinking alcohol. I was the youngest of my friends and my 18 years old birthday had been two weeks before that day. "Appearances can be deceiving." I said. We drank some doses and I was getting drunk, I was laughing for no funny reason. The drinks were really bad, I still don't understand why do people pay so much money for that and I spent almost my whole money in that night . It was getting late and then I came home, my mom was so disappointed, she ticked me off. And I cried the whole night, drunk!

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A memory from two years ago

December, 23rd of 2014 was one of the most exciting days of my life. I wasn't feeling good on that day, I was fed up with my life and the people around me. Then I received my money and I invited my friends to hang out with me, we decided to go to a sushi restaurant an hour away from my home. My mom was at work and I called her to say that I was going to go out.
When I got there, no one had arrived, as always, I am the first one to arrive/get somewhere. I waited for them for 10 minutes and they all arrived at the same time. It was early and the sushis wasn't ready yet, so we had to wait a few minutes until it was done. We talked about the school, relationships and about university. I was trying to forget all the bad things in my life.
I served myself with ten pieces of sushis, they were gorgeous and I wolfed them down quickly cause I was starving. At the moment all of us When we all finished our meal we had only one option and that was to go home, but I wasn't feeling like to go going home, my night was missing emotion excitement. Me and three of my friends My three friends and I  decided to go to a mall near the sushi restaurant, the  which is full of stores, restaurants, pubs, leisure spaces, outdoor fields and even an amusement park. But the reason I got went there was to have some alcohol.
That was terrifying, I have had never had alcohol before. We entered in the pub, there were two skin (?) waitresses and a man (the bartender), the pub was dark, with British-rock-band pictures on the walls, so many a lot of young people (but no one as young as us), I felt like I was in Liverpool for one moment. We sat at a table and we ordered four caipifrutas with different flavors, a traditional drink of my country, that was the only proof that I really was in Teresina, Brazil. The waitress was gazing at us with a suspicious look, she get went next to the counter where the other waitress was eagerly standing and they starting arguing about something. The other waitress with a creepy face got at us requiring to see our identity cards, cause she thought we were too young to be drinking alcohol.
I was the youngest of my friends and my 18 years old  18th birthday had been two weeks before that day. "Appearances can be deceiving," I said. We drank some doses and I was getting drunk, I was laughing for no funny reason. The drinks were really bad, I still don't understand why do people pay so much money for that and I spent almost my whole money in that night . It was getting late and then I came home, my mom was so disappointed, she ticked me off. And I cried the whole night, drunk!

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