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The advertisement cheating (PRACTICING MY WRITING) PLEASE CHECK ME ! I would like to talk about the advertisements I think everybody around the world knows the meaning but. One of the major issues of those if some countries don't care about the content of the advertisement. The marketing use a lot of advertisement and involve the culture of the country to attract to consumers. However something they companies lie about their products or destroy the reliability of another products. Another problem is when they interfer with the health and stylelife of the people. We know that, because many huge factories of junk food spend much money in their advertisement to convince people that their food or meals are best and healthy like the natural food. Some governments don't care about, yet inside of that the reason is the companies pay millions of dollars and it´s way to contribute with the state. Furthermore Companies that not produce food do this to control the market and to be the only company that provide his services or his produces to the country, as a result they invest in many advertisement and the don't have competence. That we calling monopoly and we have to don't support that sometime we have to looking for more alternatives. The advertisement is cheating,many brands are saved in your mind and you think that it's the best, thought you don't know the why or you don't have strong arguments to support that. It`s only advertisement. Thanks for reading me and check my grammar and coherency ! please !

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Cheating in Advertising (PRACTICING MY WRITING) PLEASE CHECK ME !

I will talk about adverts known throughout the world, with a clear meaning, but a big issue (?of those if some countries don't care about the content of the advertisement.?)  Sales uses lots of ads and involve national identity to attract consumers. However sometimes these ads lie about their products or disparage other products. Another problem is when they interfere with people's well-being. We know this because many huge factories of junk food spend lots on their ads convincing us that their food or meals are best and healthy like natural food. Some governments ignore this because these factories pay millions of dollars contributing to the state. Further, one or several companies, being the only suppliers, who expressly limit their production so as to control the market are called 'monopolistic' and we should not support them if we can find an alternative. The advert is cheating, many brands are saved in your mind and you think that they are best, thought you don't know why or you don't have strong arguments to support your belief. It`s only advertising.

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Thanks for reading me and check my grammar and coherency ! please !

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