Writing an e-mail (training to First Certificate) Dear Bob, Thanks for your e-mail asking for information about people's first jobs. My first job was as a monitor of a summer school. I was 17 years

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Writing an e-mail (training to First Certificate) Dear Bob, Thanks for your e-mail asking for information about people's first jobs. My first job was as a monitor of a summer school. I was 17 years old, when I finished the High School. It took place in July when children started their holidays too. It was a great experience for me because I could learn to deal with children between 5 to 12 years old, and I learnt work in a team to decide what activities we would do and prepare these. In addition, it was very useful for me because I realised yhat I liked this kind of job and it helped me to choose the career of Teacher. However, it wasn't a good-paied job, furthemore we had to dedicate a lot of extra-hours to prepare the activities. I hope that answers your questions. Please write to me if you need more information. I,d like to see your finished project. Best wishes.

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Writing an e-mail (training for First Certificate)

Dear Bob,

Thanks for your e-mail asking for information about people's first jobs.

My first job was as a monitor of a summer school. I was 17 years old, when I finished High School. It took place in July when children started their holidays too.

It was a great experience for me because I could learn to deal with children between 5 to 12 years old, and I learnt to work in a team to decide what activities we would do and prepare. In addition, it was very useful for me because I realised that I liked this kind of job and it helped me to choose the career of Teacher.

However, it wasn't a well-paid job, furthermore we had to dedicate a lot of extra-hours to prepare the activities.

I hope that answers your questions. Please write to me if you need more information. I'd like to see your finished project.

Best wishes.

Hello Cristina,

Nice informal email, you have some good connectors and very few mistakes. Without seeing the question I don't know whether you have covered all of the points but if you have it should get a reasonably good mark.

Hope this helps

Bob

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