I am learning for the exam, having this corrected might help
Finding a employee who has the right education for your job is really difficult. We are living in a world full of changements, the time is running. Something thats in today is tomorrow out. For that reason it is important that you have a solid education which will bring you a steady income.
Having the "right" education is not that easy. It is expencive in time and money and also does not give you the guarantee for a job afterwards. Because of that I think the governememt should give student who want to do further educations the possibility to do them. They could help them by giving out more stipendiums. If you want study and can not because of the money it is the government who has to step in. They could also make fees cheaper, but it is to cincider that this might also have the effect, that students who do not really want to learn and just do not know what to do, study.
Another aspect that I mentioned before is the time. You have to invest a lot of time in your studies. So it can be helpful when you have the possibility to study at home and do not have to travel to your campus. A solution might be learning from home on the internet. With the technological possibilities we have to day it is no problem to offer this.
I by my self think that having the opportunity to learn is more important then choosing the place to study.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
1
I am learning for the exam, having this corrected might help
Finding a employee who has the right education for your job is really difficult. We are living in a world full of change, and time flies. Something that is in today is tomorrow out. For that reason it is important that you have a solid education which will bring you a steady income.Having the "right" education is not that easy. It is expensive in time and money and also does not guarantee a job afterwards. Because of that I think the government should give students who want to do further education the possibility to do it. The government could help them by giving out more stipendiums. If you want to study but cannot because of the money it is the government who has to step in. They could also make fees cheaper. But one has to consider ensuring that students, who do not really want to learn and just do not know what to do, study.
Another aspect that I mentioned before is time. You have to invest a lot of time in your studies. So it can be helpful when you have the possibility to study at home and do not have to travel to your campus. A solution might be learning from home on the internet. With the technical possibilities we have today it is no problem to offer this.
I, myself, think that having the opportunity to learn is more important than choosing where to study.
Very well written!
1
I am learning for the exam, having this corrected might help
Finding an employee who has the right education for a job is really difficult. We are living in a world full of changements, the time is running times are always changing. Something that is in today is out tomorrow out. For that reason it is important that you have a solid education which will bring you a steady income.Having the "right" education is not that easy. It is expencive in costs time and money and also does not give you the guarantee for of a job afterwards. Because of that I think the governememt government should give students who want to do further educations continue onto further education the possibility to do them so. They could help them by giving out more stipendiums bursaries / scholarships. If you want study and can not because of the money it is the government who has should to step in. They could also make fees cheaper, but it is to cincider they should also consider that this might also have the effect, that students who do not really want to learn and just do not know what to do, study. (A better way to say this is: However, they should also consider that this might encourage students who do not really want to learn).
Another aspect that I mentioned before is the time. You have to invest a lot of time in your studies. So it can be helpful when you have the possibility to study at home and do not have to travel to your campus. A solution might be learning from home on the internet. With the technological possibilities we have today it is no problem to offer this.
I myself think that having the opportunity to learn is more important then than choosing the place where to study.
1
I am learning for the exam, having this corrected might help
Finding an employee who has the right proper education for your a job is really difficult. We are living in a world full of changements, the time is running. Somethings which are in today are out tomorrow. For this that reason it is important that you have a solid education which will bring you a steady income.Having the "right" education is not that easy. It is expensive in time and money and also does not give you the guarantee for a job afterwards. Because of that I think the government should give the student who want to do further educations the possibility to do it them. They could help them by giving out more stipendiums scholarship. If you want to study and can not because of the money it is the government who has to step in. They could also make fees cheaper, but it is to consider that this might also have the effect, that students who do not really want to learn and just do not know what to do, study.
Another aspect that I mentioned before is the time. You have to invest a lot of time in your studies. So it can be helpful when you have the possibility to study at home and do not have to travel to your campus. A solution might be learning from home on the internet. With the technological possibilities we have today it is no problem to offer this.
I myself think that having the opportunity to learn is more important then choosing the place to study.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
