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What a beautiful day today! It is saturday today! things are wonderful cause we can have two days off to enjoy the beautiful sunshine.the sun shines brightly outside which makes me feel so good.My mood depends on the weather .for the past a couple of days,it has been cloudy all the time which had bad effect on my mood. The May day is coming,I and my friends plan to travel to somewhere we have never been to before.that sounds great! I am sure we will enjoy ourselves.

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What a beautiful day today!

To avoid redundancy, try using: What a beautiful day! or Today is beautiful!
 

It is (you can make this a conjunction: It's)  saturday Saturday (names of week days, months and holidays should be capitalized) today!  things Things (capitialize the first letter of every new sentence) are wonderful cause because we can (not needed) have two days off to enjoy the beautiful sunshine. the The sun shines brightly outside which makes me feel so good. My mood depends on the weather. for For the past a couple of days ( a cleaner way to word this: For the last few days or The past few days. The way it is worded now is somewhat awkward you wouldn't really say "past a couple of days"), it has been cloudy all the time which had a bad effect on my mood.

The May day is coming (May 1st is coming or The first day of May is coming), I and my friends My friends and I plan to travel to somewhere we have never been to before somewhere that we have never been to before. that That sounds great! I am sure we will enjoy ourselves.

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