The village. Part 2. Chapter 3. "The first training". Correct my mistakes, please
The next morning I was woken by the phone call. After barking some swearing words I got the phone.
"Yes!"
"Hi, Damien! I appointed the training at 7pm today in the evening.
"Sure, cap! When will we gather?"
"At half past six."
The most wonderful view showed in front of me when I arrived at the training field. Besides the captain there were Tom, Bill Meadow and Bill Bright who joined us at the last season. We were just five...
"Well, the great beginning of the season! We're totally prepared! So... This time we'll run till Bath Town and back" Cap said agressively.
"Are you going mad? It's ten miles!" Tommy said.
"Shut your mug, Tom!" Bright said.
Bright was the brutal man when it was necessary. I still didn't understand why he changed Tiger Atlethic and playing in Championship to our village and the amateur team filled of dolts. So we began our first training in the new season.
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The village. Part 2. Chapter 3. "The first training". Correct my mistakes, please
The next morning I was woken up by the phone call. After barking some swear words I answered the phone."Yes!"
"Hi, Damien! I scheduled the training at 7pm today in the evening.
"Sure, cap! When will we meet?"
"At half past six."
The most wonderful view showed in front of me when I arrived at the training field. Besides the captain, there were Tom, Bill Meadow and Bill Bright who joined us at the last season. We were just five...
"Well, a great beginning of the season! We're totally prepared! So... This time we'll run till Bath Town and back" Cap said aggressively.
"Are you going mad? It's ten miles!" Tommy said.
"Shut your mug, Tom!" Bright said.
Bright was a brutal man when it was necessary. I still didn't understand why he left Tiger Atlethic and to play in the Championship for our village -- a amateur team filled of dolts. So we began our first training in the new season.
Good job! A few mistakes with "the/a" usage that you might want to look into.
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