Women are stronger than men mentally.
Women is stronger than men mentally.
In Japan, when it comes to elderly couples, it's said if a wife die, a husband die soon as well.
On the other hand, even if a husband die, a wife can enjoy the rest of the life.
This is because men are weak mentally, especially the men who let the women do house hold chores.
After a wife died, they don't know how to cook, how to do some laundry and so on.
They'll know that value of their wife and miss their wife and become really weak.
It doesn't mean they commit a suicide.
Some people got diseases after their partners die.
Because our mental is associated with our health.
People who can't stay posotive or enjoy their life, they could got diseases easily.
Does it also happen in your country?
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Women are stronger than men mentally.
Women are stronger than men mentally.In Japan, when it comes to elderly couples, it's said if a wife die, the husband dies soon after.
On the other hand, even if a husband die, the wife can enjoy the rest of her life.
This is because men are weak mentally, especially the men who let the women do household chores.
After their wife is died, they don't know how to cook, how to do laundry and so on.
That is when they realise the value of and miss their wife and become really weak.
It doesn't mean they commit suicide.
Some people get diseases after their partners die.
Our mental health is linked with our overall health.
People who can't stay positive or enjoy their life, get diseases easily.
Does it also happen in your country?
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Women are stronger than men mentally.
Women is are mentally stronger than men mentally.In Japan, when it comes to elderly couples, it's said if a wife dies, her husband will die soon after as well.
On the other hand, even if a husband dies, a wife can enjoy the rest of the a long life.
This is because men are mentally weak, especially the those men who let their wives women do all the household chores.
After a the wife dies, they don't know how to cook, how to do some the laundry and so on.( or any of the other chores)
They'll know that learn the value of their wife and will miss their wife them causing them to and become really weak. I don't mean that they commit a suicide but, because our mental health is associated (closely linked) with our physical health, some people get sick got diseases after their partners dies. (their partner's death). People who can't stay (remain) positive or and enjoy their life, are more likely to become ill they could got diseases easily.
Does this it also happen in your country?
Hisako, the text in brackets are options of other ways to express what you have already written. What you have is good but just to give you some other options. I moved the sentence with because as technically you should not start a sentence with because, lots of people do so it is your choice. I hope this helps. Claire
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Women are Stronger than Men Mentally.
Women are stronger than men mentally.
In Japan, when it comes to elderly couples, it's said that if the wife dies, the husband will soon die as well.
On the other hand, even if a husband dies, a wife can enjoy the rest of her life.
This is because men are weak mentally, especially the men who let the women do house hold chores.
After their wife dies, they don't know how to cook, how to do laundry and so on.
They'll know that value of their wife, miss her, and potentially become weak.
It doesn't mean they commit a suicide.
Some people get diseases after their partners die.
Because our mentality is associated with our health.
People who can't stay positive or enjoy their life get diseases easily.
Does it also happen in your country?
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こんにちは！コメントありがとう！そうなんですね。 Being women in Vietnam sounds tough! 男の人がわがままなんですね！ 素敵な旦那さんを見つけるのは大変そうですね。
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ベトナムでは、女の人は多くの仕事をします。家事や金もうけをしないと。特に、子供がいたら、もっと働きます。国の男の人はたいへんわがままです。奥さんがなくなったら、他の女の人に結婚します。そして新しい奥さんは家事や金もうけをしないと。
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