The Hou He(1)
Hou He is a sedate small village on south of Taihang mountain(Jiaozuo,China),at weekend,many people from city came there,enjoy with fresh air and relax themself, I am the same as them,came and look for solace and relief.
Along the pathway on the south side of village,we began to into the canyon and was over whelmed by green at once,and encircle by the pure and fresh air , evrything gladden my heart,cleanse my soul.
All the way down,there were wild flowers and wild fruit came into sight that your eyes was keep full occpied .and in winter ,the leaves of tree fallen,bruches sway,they all adorn in the stone montain.
That is a living Chinese landscape ink painting indeed.
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The Hou He(1)
Hou He is a sedate small village on south of the Taihang mountain(Jiaozuo,China). At weekends many people from the city come there to enjoy the with fresh air and to relax. themself, I am the same as them, I go to came and look for solace and relief.Along the pathway on the south side of village, we began to into the canyon/valleybegins and one is immediately overwhelmed was over whelmed by green at once,and surrounded encircle by the pure, and fresh air , everything gladdens my heart, and cleanses my soul.
All the way down, there were so many wild flowers and wild fruit everywhere the eye could see. came into sight that your eyes was keep full occpied .and In winter, the leaves have fallen anedthe bare branches of tree fallen,bruches sway, and they all adorn in the rocky stone mountain.
That is a living Chinese landscape ink painting indeed.
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The Hou He(1)
Hou He is a sedate small village on the south of the Taihang mountain(Jiaozuo,China),at the weekend,many people from the city came come there to enjoy with the fresh air and relax themself, I am do the same as them and go came and look for solace and relief.Along the pathway on the south side of the village,we began to go into the canyon and was were at once over whelmed by the greenery at once,and that encircled by the pure and fresh air , evrything everything gladden gladdened my heart and,cleansed my soul.
All the way down,there were wild flowers and wild fruit which came into sight so that your eyes was were kept fully occpied occupied .and in winter ,the leaves of tree fallen,bruches branches swayed as they all adorned in the stone montain mountain.
That is a living Chinese landscape ink painting indeed.
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thank you very much.
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There are too many tense mistakes.You need to pay more attention to grammer and tense.
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The Hou He(1)
Hou He is a sedate small village on south of Taihang mountain(Jiaozuo,China),at weekend,many people from city come there to enjoy with the fresh air and relax themself themselves, I am the same as them,came come and look for solace and relief.Along the pathway on the south side of village,we began to go into the canyon andwhich was over whelmed by green at once,and encircle by the pure and fresh air , everything can gladden glad my heart,cleanes clean my soul.
All the way down,there were wild flowers and wild fruit came into sight that and your eyes was keep full occpied .and in winter ,the leaves of tree fall,bruches sway,they all adorn in the stone montain.
That is a living Chinese landscape ink painting indeed.
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