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A little bit about myself This is my first time writing something here on Italki. I googled "how to improve English Writing skill" and there are some articles suggested this site and after going through the site, I see that it is very helpful for people to exchange their languages and help out each other to correct writing mistakes. In short, I hope I can contribute something to this site as well as learn more English from everyone. My hobbies are watching Youtube whenever I have a free time. My favourite YouTube's Chanel is RomanAtWood, CaseyNeistat and other random makeup and fashion's videos. These videos have not only entertained me; somehow they inspire me a lot in term of being positive in life, falling in love with English, and desiring to go travelling abroad. Besides, reading English's blogs is also one of my favourites because the stories often involve bloggers' activities about things they do every day in their life with positive messages which make me decide to improve English's writing so that one day I will be able to write my own daily English's blog.

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A little bit about myself

This is my first time writing something here on Italki. I googled "how to improve English Writing skill" and there are found some articles suggested suggesting this site. After going through the site, I see that it is very helpful for people to exchange their languages and help out each each other out to  by correcting writing mistakes. In short, I hope I can contribute something to this site as well as learn more English from everyone.
My hobby hobbies are is to watching Youtube whenever I have a free time.* My favourite YouTube's Channels is are RomanAtWood, CaseyNeistat and other random makeup and fashion's videos. These videos have not only entertained me, but have somehow inspired me a lot in terms of being positive in life, falling in love with English, and desiring to go travelling abroad. Besides**, reading English's blogs is also one of my favourites hobbies because the stories often involve bloggers' activities about the things they do in their everyday life lives with positive messages.  This made which make me decide to improve my English's writing so that one day I will be able to write my own daily English's*** blog.

* In this sentence, you only mentioned one hobby, so instead of writing 'my hobbies' (plural), I have corrected it to 'my hobby' (singular). 
** 'Besides' is not wrong, but it feels a little bit awkward here. Maybe try to use 'additionally', 'also', 'in addition'...etc. 
*** Instead of 'English's', which is never right, just write 'English', or 'my English'! :) 

Well done and keep it up! :D
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