Presentation for a weird scholarship
I’m a student nearing to graduate in Cinema, and I’m quickly losing my motivation. Ahead of the postgraduate void, I feel the passing years and the increasing of economic difficulties. When I was 19 I was studying computer science; after years of bad school performances I decided to bow out and start to work. During the 4 workman’s years I graduated at night school with the highest score of the class. I left my work to start University, supported by my family. During this period somebody stole my camera, and after I was conned trying to buy a new one. Now I’m writing my thesis, but more and more often my degree course is discredited by everyone, so much so that I feel the time of graduation as a burden to be rid, I’m almost ashamed to conclude it. I would like to have a new experience abroad to improve my English, however what worries me is that I don’t have the economic resources to do it. I think maybe this opportunity can show me the right way to orient myself for the next few years.
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Presentation for a weird scholarship
I’m a student nearing to graduate graduation in Cinema, and I’m quickly losing my motivation. Ahead of the postgraduate void, I (already) feel the passing years and the increasing of economic difficulties (or: the economic difficulties increasing). When I was 19 I was studying computer science but after years of bad school performances I decided to bow out and start to work working. During the 4 workman’s my working years I graduated at night school with the highest score of in the class. I left my work to start University, supported by my family. During this period somebody stole my camera, and after later I was conned when trying to buy a new one. Now I’m writing my thesis, but more and more often my degree course is being discredited by everyone. So much so that I feel the time of graduation as is a burden to be rid of. I’m almost ashamed to conclude (finish would be better here) it. I would like to have a new experience abroad to improve my English, however what worries me is that I don’t have the economic financial resources to do it. I think maybe this opportunity can will show me the right way to orient myself for the next few years.Hey Tomas,
I hope my corrections help you. Your English is very good but I just made some suggestions to make it sound better. I wish you luck in all of your endeavors. Keep your chin up and don't let other people's opinions affect what you love to do! Congratulations on your graduation and the completion of your thesis. Take care!
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