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The roaring twenties Hello:) I juste wrote an essay about the innovations of the roaring twenties and would you be so kind to correct my mistakes? That would help me a lot! The roaring twenties is a period of innovation and change but also the Golden Age of America. The people of this time were hoping for a new change to come ahead and bring a period of happiness, instead of the gloomy period once before. It was a time where America had many intellectuals finding numerous inventions that were beneficial for society where it might be cruel to think that the World War One actually a source to progress scientifically and industrially. For example, Henry Ford created the first affordable, combustion engine car called the Model-T. The creation of the Model-T changed the lives of every American and was looked at as a way of freedom. The demand for vehicles sparked a whole new industry, creating jobs, and improving the American economy. With so many vehicles on the roads, roads needed to become bigger and better which spawned a nationwide road construction. This also created more jobs and strengthened the economy even further. The Airplane was first invented in 1903; it amazed everyone because it seemed like a dream come true but they never really dared because of how dangerous it still was. Then again, the world war one made use of them and that’s when airplanes started to get popular and accepted; instead of receiving mail in two weeks it would only take a couple of days. Soon after this, transporting people quickly caught on although only the upper-class people could afford it, it soon became accessible to almost everyone.

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The roaring twenties

Hello:) I juste wrote an essay about the innovations of the roaring twenties and would you be so kind to correct my mistakes? That would help me a lot!


The roaring twenties is a period of innovation and change but also the Golden Age of America. The people of this time were hoping for a new change to come ahead arrive, and bringing a period of happiness, instead of the gloomy period once which came before. It was a time where America had many intellectuals finding discovering numerous inventions that were beneficial for society.  It might be cruel to think that the World War One actually  was a source to of progress, both scientifically and industrially.
For example, Henry Ford created the first affordable, combustion engine car called the Model-T. The creation of the Model-T changed the lives of every American and was looked at as a way of freedom. The demand for vehicles sparked a whole new industry, creating jobs, and improving the American economy. With so many vehicles on the roads, roads needed to become bigger and better which spawned a nationwide road construction. This also created more jobs and strengthened the economy even further.
The Airplane was first invented in 1903; it amazed everyone because it seemed like a dream come true (Im rewriting this bit, hope I get what you mean) as they had never really expected it to happen as it was so dangerous but they never really dared because of how dangerous it still was. Then again, the world war one made use of them and that’s when airplanes started to get popular and accepted; instead of receiving mail in two weeks it would only take a couple of days. Soon after this, transporting people quickly caught on although only the upper-class people could afford it, it soon became accessible to almost everyone.

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