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winter vacation When winter come in,I know also quickly take a holiday. Weather bureau say very cold in this year,but GuangDong province never snow,I want to see snow.So,I plan to going to see the snow.

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Winter Vacation

When winter comes, I would like to  take a quick holiday. The weather bureau says that it will be very cold in this year, but in Guangdong province, it never snows. I want to see snow so I am planning to going to see the snow.

Notes:

1. Instead of "The weather bureau says", you could say "The weather bureau forecasts".

2. You can optionally leave out "province" after Guangdong.


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winter  vacation

When  winter comes, I want to quickly take a vacation. The weather bureau announces it will be very cold this year.  GuangDong province never gets snow. I want to see snow, so I am planning to go to see the snow.

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