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Friendship changes Tet is coming near. My room-mates is going to come back home to enjoy Tet holiday with families. So, everybody discussed that we should hold a party before leave Saigon (the city where we’re living in). this year is the final year we stay together. Therefore, it’s happy if the whole room attend this party. Because, we don’t have much time left. All agreed to go to Thu Thiem canal, except Trang (She hasn’t spoken much recently. She decided stay at dormitory to do her paper). In fact, there are only 7 people go to the party tonight (total is 9 people). There were some people angry because Linh agreed to attend but change her opinions now to go out with her new boyfriend. I don’t feel angry about this. I think we all should go on a voluntary basic. It’s not necessary to make everybody stressful. It’s enough with only 7 people. And this stage is in graduate time, no one have free time, let them home to study. If they want to have happy time together, it’s able to happen here, in the dormitory. It’s not necessary to go out together. Base on my experience, every time whole my room-mates go out together, there’re always conflict. It’s not necessary to take a chance for conflict happen.

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Friendship changes

Tet is nearly here.  Tet is coming near. My roommates are is going to come back home to enjoy the Tet holiday with their families. So, everybody discussed that we should hold a party before leaving Saigon (the city where we’re living in). this year is the final year we will stay together. Therefore, I will be it’s happy if the whole room attends this party, because, we don’t have much time left. Everyone All agreed to go to Thu Thiem canal, except Trang (She hasn’t spoken much recently. She decided stay in the at dormitory to do her paper). In fact, there are only 7 people going to the party tonight (in total there are is 9 people). There were some people angry because Linh agreed to attend but changed her mind opinions now to go out with her new boyfriend. I don’t feel angry about this. I think we all should go on a voluntary basis. It’s not necessary to make everybody stressed. It’s enough with only 7 people. And this stage is near in graduation time, no one has free time.  Let them go home to study. If they want to have a great happy time together, it’s about able to happen here, in the dormitory. It’s not necessary to go out together. Base on my experience, every time all whole my roommates go out together, there are always conflicts. It’s not necessary to take a chance for conflict happen.


Good posting.  A few small things but I understood what you were trying to say.  Have fun at your party.

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