Stray Dog
In the mid-December, I found a raw-boned stray dog sticked around my campus. It looked like Shiba Inu and had a beautiful and yellow fur.I had no idea whether I should help it. If I just only fed it , I was afraid that it may lost its ability to survive after feeding it for a period of time.However ,if I left it alone,it might be starved to die.After thinking and planning for a while time, I decided to help it until finding a good owner ,which can take care of it for its whole lifetime. It was a easy plan yet not easy to carrying it out.I had to looking for it around our campus to fed it,moved heaven and earth to let it trust me for subsequent choke collar training, and looking for halfway house for it.I was so lucky that lots of students in our school helped me propaganda something about the dog,like do not feed the dog or keeping it away from the classroom in order to avoid it making mass in the classroom.However, there was still lots of students in our school feeding it ,and let it indoor because it seemed pity.It was conceivable that it made lots of mass and lots of students started to hate it .The worst of all was that it was caught by dog catching team because someone called them to catch it .In Taiwan,once the dog is caught by dog catching team,the chance for it to survive is slim.I was so heart-breaking and didn't know how to do.What I can do is looking for help in the internet .Fortunately, lots of people gave me a hand ,and also having a nice person can gave a temporily home for it after knowing it still couldn't be touched by anyone.At the end ,I found that it was a lost dog,and fortunately came back to its original owner.It was one of the best experience for me, and also I learned a lot from it.
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Stray Dog
In the mid-December, I found a raw-boned stray dog sticked around my campus. It looked like Shiba Inu and had a beautiful and yellow fur.I had no idea whether I should help it. If I just only fed it , I was afraid that it may lost its ability to survive after feeding it for a period of time.However ,if I left it alone,it might be starved to die.After thinking and planning for a while time, I decided to help it until finding a good owner ,which can take care of it for its whole lifetime. It was a easy plan yet not easy to carrying it out.I had to looking for it around our campus to fed it,moved heaven and earth to let it trust me for subsequent choke collar training, and looking for halfway house for it.I was so lucky that lots of students in our school helped me propaganda something about the dog,like do not feed the dog or keeping it away from the classroom in order to avoid it making mass in the classroom.However, there was still lots of students in our school feeding it ,and let it indoor because it seemed pity.It was conceivable that it made lots of mass and lots of students started to hate it .The worst of all was that it was caught by dog catching team because someone called them to catch it .In Taiwan,once the dog is caught by dog catching team,the chance for it to survive is slim.I was so heart-breaking and didn't know how to do.What I can do is looking for help in the internet .Fortunately, lots of people gave me a hand ,and also having a nice person can gave a temporily home for it after knowing it still couldn't be touched by anyone.At the end ,I found that it was a lost dog,and fortunately came back to its original owner.It was one of the best experience for me, and also I learned a lot from it.Please remember to leave a space after all punctuation.
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Stray Dog
In mid-December, I found a scrawny stray dog hanging around my campus. It looked like Shiba Inu and had a beautiful yellow coat.I had no idea whether I should help it or not. If I fed it , I was afraid that it may lose its ability to survive after feeding it for a period of time.However ,if I left it alone,it might starve to death.After thinking and planning for a while, I decided to help it until I could find a good owner ,who could take care of it for its whole lifetime. It was an easy plan, yet not easy to carry out.I had to look for it around our campus to feed it. I moved heaven and earth to allow it to trust me for subsequent choke collar training, and looking for a halfway house for it.I was so lucky that lots of students in our school helped me to advertise something about the dog to the other students, like "do not feed the dog or "keep it away from the classroom" to stop it making a mess in the classroom.However, there were still lots of students in our school feeding it ,and letting it indoors because they were sorry for it. This led to it making a lot of mess and lots of students started to hate it .The worst of all was that it was caught by a dog catching team because someone called them to catch it .In Taiwan,once the dog is caught by the dog catching team,the chance for it to survive is slim.I was so heart-broken and didn't know what to do.What I could do is look for help on the internet .Fortunately, lots of people gave me a hand ,and I found a nice person who gave it a temporary home. I knew it was safe now. In the end ,I found that it was a lost dog,and fortunately it went back to its original owner.It was one of the best experiences for me, and I also learned a lot from it.Want to progress faster?
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