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A Letter Writing task 1 (a letter) Your family situation has changed, and you need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the real estate agent asking for a new arrangement. You should say – What is your family situation? – What are the requirements for the new accommodation? – When do you want to move? Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Mr. Chen, and I met you at your office last month when we signed the contract. My family first required a two-bedroomed flat, with one room for my wife and I, and the other for my daughter. However, my niece, who is going to attending university here this autumn, plans to live with us, so we need an extra room for her. As her studies may involves research work at home, she also needs a study. Since it is expected that she will probably take the subway to commute to and from her university every day, we would like a place close to a subway station, preferably within easy walking distance. We also want the neighborhood to be lighted well; otherwise, she could be unsafe when she come home alone at night. As we have discussed, we would like to move in on 1st August. I would be greatly grateful for your help.

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A Letter

Writing task 1 (a letter)
Your family situation has changed, and you need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the real estate agent asking for a new arrangement. You should say
– What is your family situation?
– What are the requirements for the new accommodation?
– When do you want to move?

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Mr. Chen, and I met you at your office last month when we signed the contract.
My family originally required a two-bedroomed flat, with one room for my wife and I, and the other for my daughter. However, my niece, who is going to be attending university here this autumn, plans to live with us, so we need an extra room for her. As her studies may involves research work at home, she also needs a study.
Since it is expected that [I feel like the "probably" after this is enough to indicate the expectation] she will probably take the subway to commute to and from her university every day, we would like a place close to a subway station, preferably within easy walking distance.
We also want the neighborhood to be well-lit; otherwise, it may be unsafe if she comes home alone at night.
As we have discussed, we would like to move in on 1st August. I would be very grateful for your help.

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