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exercise of essay Schoolteachers used to be the source of information, however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before as the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion? Schoolteachers were always regarded as the resource of information, while nowadays, some people wonder the importance of teachers in schools because they are able to get knowledge from the increasing forms of information. In my opinion, teachers cannot be replaced easily not only due to their professional views towards the topics themselves, they can also provide details related to them. Either books or internet which offers information could hardly be definite right, because as we all know, ideas that written in books or post to the website are more represent the view from the author. Without an authorized recommendation, the initials are likely to be misled, they cannot choose the correct reference books, or they may also fail to get what is emphasized or recommended in the articles and passages. Teachers at this moment could take advantage of their knowledge on the subject and give useful advice to help students. None of the problems we meet could be isolated itself. Supposing that we need further information to the topic, are we capable enough to find proper resources that can efficiently solve our queries? We do own more accesses to the information now than before, however I think teachers in schools have the ability of teaching instead of just giving knowledge. The view that teachers are so important as before owing to the variety of information resources comes to one-sided. In conclusion, I do not agree with the ignorance of the importance of schoolteachers as they are more of an information provider.

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Exercise

Schoolteachers used to be the source of much information, however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?


Schoolteachers were always regarded as a good source of information, but nowadays, some people question the importance of teachers in schools because they are able to learn in other ways. In my opinion, teachers cannot be replaced easily, not only due to their professional views towards the topics themselves, they can also provide details related to them.

Books and internet offering information cannot be completely accurate, because as we all know, ideas written in books or posted to websites more represent the view from their authors. Without an authorized recommendation, learners are likely to be misled, they cannot choose the correct reference books, or they may also fail to get what is emphasized or recommended in the articles and passages. Teachers at this moment could take advantage of their knowledge on the subject and give useful advice to help students.

None of the problems we meet are independent. If we need further information to the topic, are we able to find proper resources that can efficiently solve our queries? We have more information now than before, however I think schoolteachers can teach instead of just giving knowledge. The view that teachers are as important as before owing to the variety of information resources is one-sided.

In conclusion, I think that teachers are as important as before, but now their role has changed more to being an information provider.

Very well written!

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Ielts exercise - writing part 2

Schoolteachers were always regarded as the main information resource of information, while whereas nowadays, some people wonder about the importance of teachers in schools, because they (who does 'they refer to?  teachers or people?) are able to get knowledge can be obtained from the increasingly many forms of information. In my opinion, teachers cannot be easily replaced, easily not only due to their professional views towards understanding of/insights into the topics themselves, they can also provide details related to them.

Neither books nor internet (which offer information) could hardly be absolutely correct definite right, because as we all know, ideas that are written in books or posted to the websites are more likely to represent the view from of the author. Without an authorized recommendation, the initials readers are likely to be misled, they cannot choose the correct reference books, or they may also fail to get what is emphasized or recommended in the articles and passages. Teachers at this such moments could use take advantage of their knowledge on the subject to advantage, and give useful advice to help students.

None of the problems we meet could be isolated(???) itself. Supposing that we need further information to on the topic, are we capable enough to find of finding proper resources that can efficiently solve our queries? We do own??? more accesses have better access to the information now than before. However I think teachers in schools have the ability of teaching instead of just giving knowledge. The view that teachers are not so as important as before owing to the variety of information resources turns out comes to one-sided.

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Thank you! I wonder if it's difficult for you to understand the article. Because someone told me that my logic in writing was a bit complicated.
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Hi BonBon! Nice entry depicting the importance of a teacher or Guru. Our teacher or guru is the person who shows us right path and leads us to success. Nothing can replace them. Their vast amount of experience, profound knowledge, ability to interact directly with the students and address their problems, skill to teach in a simple way, their emphasis on importance of moral values while teaching so that their students can be responsible citizens of tomorrow; all these characteristics set a teacher apart from any other source of information.

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