The Stranger. Part 3. "The Restoring" Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, trying to defend the Green Island.
It was the severe time for the Green Island. Enemy stroke all settlements at the same time. We had managed to hold PortLake Town, but we didn't know what was going on in other towns. Lisa told me that the fleet would solve this problem, but I wasn't so sure.
"Look, Damien! We were just two hundred against thousands enemy's soldiers. They had no chance to capture the town." Lisa said to me.
"But we don't know how many soldiers would attack our sea ports."
"There are several battle magicians in each of our sea port. These magicians are like artilery. So they will destroy enemy's army and fleet without any trouble."
"I'm still not so sure... Well, my usual question: What will we do next?"
"We should to restore Port Lake Town" Lisa answered.
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The Stranger. Part 3:The Restoring". Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, trying to defend the Green Island.It was a severe time for the Green Island. The enemy struck all settlements at the same time. We had managed to hold down PortLake Town, but we didn't know what was going on in other towns. Lisa told me that the fleet would solve this problem, but I wasn't so sure.
"Look, Damien! We were just two hundred people againt thousands of enemy soldiers. They had no chance to capture the town."
Lisa said to me, "but we don't know how many soldiers would attack our sea ports."
"There are several battle magicians in each of our sea port. These magicians are like artilery. So they will destroy the enemy's army and fleet without any trouble."
"I'm still not so sure... Well, my usual question: What will we do next?"
"We should go to restore Port Lake Town" Lisa answered.
Great job! In English when you use quotations every time a new speaker is speaking you need to separate the quotes. If the quote is too long you indent and make smaller font, however, none of yours would need that.
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