Sheffield FC. Please, correct my mistakes
Sheffield FC is an amateur English football club based in Sheffield City. The club is known as the oldest football club in the world. They were founded one hundred fifty nine years ago (October, 24, eighteen fifty seven) Currently Sheffield FC participates in Northhern Premier League, division one (nineth level in English football).
Since 2001 Sheffield FC play at BT Local Business Stadium, which has capacity of twelve hundred. From the age of foundation until 2001 the club hadn't their own stadium. Before the stadium had been bought, it was used by several local pub football teams, which played their home games there.
In November 2007 Sheffield got Inter Milano FC and lost 2:5. It was the friendly match, devoted for 150 years jubilee of Sheffield FC.
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Sheffield FC. Please, correct my mistakes
Sheffield FC is an amateur English football club based in the city of Sheffield. The club is known as the oldest football club in the world. They were founded one hundred fifty nine years ago (October, 24, eighteen fifty seven). Currently Sheffield FC participates in the Northhern Premier League, division one (the nineth level in English football).Since 2001 Sheffield FC have played at the BT Local Business Stadium, which has capacity of twelve hundred. From the year it was founded until 2001 the club didn't have their own stadium. Before the stadium was bought, it was used by several local pub football teams, which played their home games there.
In November 2007 Sheffield got Inter Milano FC and lost 2:5. It was the friendly match, devoted for 150 years jubilee of Sheffield FC.
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Be careful with the past tenses, they can be quite difficult. If something happened in the past and is still happening now, we can use the past perfect "The have played at the arena for 20 years".
I also suggest looking at discourse markers and other ways to join sentences to make your story flow naturally. "Founded 159 years ago, they are known as the oldest club in England and are proud of their division one position in the Northern Premier League"
Finally, sprinkle a few adjectives in, they add colour to your text.
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