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There are many languages in the world and people prefer to talk with others using their mother language. When people communicate others with different backgrounds , there is a problem that they do not know others’ meaning . However, we can solve it by creating a new language that every countries can use it together. If the barrier of language is smaller, we will communicate with others easier than before. For example, in International Congress people can solve the same things together and chat with others easier by a new language. Besides, transnational corporation can have more profits because employees from diverse branch offices can complete subjects together and they can communicate with others easily.
English is the most widely language in the world today .If people study the new language ,they will waste their time、energy and money. It is difficult for people to learn a new vocabulary、grammar and speaking ,especially poverty students and people with a huge work.
If people do not learn their mother language, small language grammars will disappear as well as cultures. For example diverse words can emphasis the difference of foods. Folk songs may disappear because most young people do not know how to sing them and how to create new songs.
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Please help me to revise it.
There are many languages in the world, and people prefer to talk with others using their mother language. When people communicate with others with from different backgrounds , there is a the problem that they do not know others’ meaning . However, we can solve it by creating a new language that every countries country can uses it together. If the barrier of language is were smaller, we will would communicate with others easier more easily than before. For example, in an international congress people can could solve the same things together and chat with others easier more easily by using a new, common language. Besides, transnational corporations can could have more increase profits because as employees from diverse branch offices can completed subjects projects together and they can communicated with others easily.English is the most widely used language in the world today. If people study the a new language, they will waste their time, energy and money. It is difficult for people to learn a new vocabulary, grammar and speaking, especially poverty-stricken students and people with a huge workloads.
If people do did not learn their mother language, small language grammars will would disappear as well as cultures. For example, diverse words can emphasis emphasize the difference of in foods. Folk songs may disappear because most young people do not know how to sing them and or how to create new songs.
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please help me to revise it
There are many languages in the world and people prefer to talk with others using their mother language. When people communicate with others from/with different backgrounds , there is a problem that they do not know the others’ meaning . However, we can solve this by creating a new language that every country can use together. If the language barrier is smaller, we can communicate with others more easily than before. For example, in an International Congress people can solve the same things together and chat with others easier by a new language. Also, transnational corporations can get more profits because employees from diverse branch offices can complete subjects together and they can communicate with others easily.English is the most widely spoken language in the world today .If people study the new language ,they will waste their time、energy and money. It is difficult for people to learn a new vocabulary、grammar and speaking ,especially poor students and the overworked.
If people do not learn their own language, small language grammars will disappear as well as cultures. For example, diverse words can emphasise food differences. Folk songs may disappear because most young people no longer know how to sing them and how to create new songs.
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