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A letter Dear Danny, Thanks a lot for your last letter. Sorry for not writing earlier, I was really busy with my exams. Well, we play football, basketball and tennis on PE lessons. My favourite sport is swimming. Actually, I prefer individual sports because it is not comfortable for me to play in a team. Basically, I do exercise every morning, go to swimming pool twice a weak and eat healthy to keep fit. I'm sorry but I need to go now, my mum asked me to help her with the washing up. Hope to hear to you soon With love, Nastya

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Your essay is really nice! I've corrected a few things to make it just a little better :-) 

A letter

Dear Danny,

Thanks a lot for your last letter. Sorry for not having written earlier, I was really busy with my exams.

Well, we play football, basketball and tennis at PE lessons. My favourite sport is swimming. Actually I prefer individual sports because it is not comfortable for me to play in a team. Basically I do exercise every morning, go to the swimming pool twice a week and eat healthy food to stay fit.

I'm sorry but I need to go now, my mum asked me to help her with the washing up. Hope to hear from you soon

With love,

Nastya


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1) Speaking of lessons, we use the preposition "at", whereas it is "in" in the case of classes :) At lessons, but in classes.
2) You might want to use "do" next to the verb in such a sentence when you need to stress something important or highlight the fact that you do really exercise (for example, in a conversation with someone who finds your words doubtful). However, it is possible both to use and skip the verb "do" in this sentence, so I wouldn't correct it here :)
3) As far as I know, we use "the" in a phrase like "to go to the swimming pool".
4) "Weak" means "poor", whereas "week" means a week :)
5) We eat healthy food to stay fit and we exercise to keep our body fit!
6) "Hope to hear from you soon" is a typical phrase we can end our letter with...


Hope it helps! :)

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