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Who can help me ? i'm a middle schlool student . i'm a new girl here . i want to make friends with you . you can chat with me on the internet .i really want you to be my new friends . i hope make friends with you .

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Is there anyone who can help me ?

I'm a middle schlool student who is new here . I'd like to make friends with you guys. ('d=would,这样礼貌一些,加上guys比较强调“你们”)You can chat with me online. I really want you to be my new friends .
i hope make friends with you . (Hope 太强势了···)And I'm really glad to make friends with you.
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Who can help me ?

i'm a middle school student . i'm a new girl here . i want to make friends with you . you can chat with me on the internet .i really want you to be my new friends .
i hope make friends with you .
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su yan, you can call me by my mail: [email protected] in actually, i also want to build the friendship relationship to everyone all around the world, included to yourself... nice to know you closely, friend... ^_^ by the way may i know your contact (email or etc)??

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