Gaps in the employment history
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I hope you all are well and just to say thank you for your help with this entries. Now I have a question that I am seeing in employment application forms. Please if you have any advise about my answer besides the grammar corrections, it would be appreciated. Here it goes:
Please explain any gaps in your employment history: Maximum length: 4000
The gaps in my employment history can be explained into two periods.
The first period started in 2009. During this period, I was partly inactive due to the reduction of working hours in my work place that affected all the staff. As a result of these changes, I had spent more time in studies which taught me the basis of the office environment and help with my career prospects.
Then, the second period started in January 2015, when my baby born. Since there, I spent time with the baby education for almost two years. Along the first year, I have participated with children centres activities which enrich my sense of community and known of the organisations in my area.
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Gaps in the employment history
Hello there,I hope you all are well and just to say thank you for your help with this entry. Now, I have a question about what I am see in employment application forms. Please, if you have any advice about my answer besides the grammar corrections, it would be appreciated. Here it goes:
Please explain any gaps in your employment history: Maximum length: 4000
The gaps in my employment history can be explained in two periods.
The first period started in 2009. During this period, I was partly inactive due to the reduction of working hours in my work place that affected all the staff.* As a result of these changes, I spent more time studying. which taught me I learned the basics of the office environment and this helped with my career prospects.
Then, The second period started in January 2015, when my baby was born. Since then, I have spent time caring for my baby for almost two years. Along the first year, During this time I have participated with the activities in children's play centers; which has enriched my sense of community and knowledge of the organisations in my area.
* Were you working during this period, even part-time? If you were working part time this would not be a gap in your employment. If you were not working it is correct to say that you were studying.
It would also be better if you stated that the period began in e.g. October 2009 until the date you became employed again.
I hope this helps you.
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