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Housework For me,housework meaning is the work be dived into pieces equally for everyone in the house.Whatever sexual or age.For example,if your family has four people,father ,mother,brother or sister and you.Father is a man,but it is not mean he can do nothing like the emperor.He also should do housework.Mother is a woman,but it is not mean she should cook or take care of children,she can fix electric light or lift heavy things if she could.Children also should do housework,parent should teach their children how to do it.Can't because of their sturdy that they don't do.They will be a spoiled children in the future. In the begining.I firmly believe my though was right.My home has four housework in the dairy. There are washing dishes,golding clothes,hanging the clothes out and taking the dog for a walk.My job is take the dog for a walk.I complete my job every day automatically.Usually,my father or mother would ask me"Can you do me a favor?"I always replied"No way!you should complete by yourself."Now that I recall of it is pathetic to an extent.My mother and father raised me since I was little,working around the clock.They paid more than me.How could I rejusted them.Nowdays,I help my parents if they in busy.Likewise,they help me if I have exam.One thing bear in my mind,"The housework should help each other,it is real equal."

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Housework

For me, housework meaning means is the work be is divided dived into pieces equally for everyone in the house.Whatever sexual Regardless of your gender or age. For example, if your family has four people; father, mother, brother or sister and you. Your/The father is a man, but it is does not mean he can do nothing like the emperor. He also should do should also do housework. Your/The mother is a woman, but it does not mean she should cook or take care of children, she can could fix electric lights or lift heavy things if she is able to. Children should also should do housework, parents should teach their children how to do it. Children shouldn't use the excuse that they can't do housework because of their studies.They will be a spoiled children in the future.
In the beginning, I firmly believed my thought was right. My home has four housework chores in the dairy schedule. These are washing dishes, folding clothes, hanging the clothes out and taking the dog for a walk. My job is take the dog for a walk. I complete my job every day automatically. Usually, my father or mother would ask me "Can you do me a favor?" and I always replied "No way! You should complete it by yourself." Now that I recall of think about it, it is pathetic to an extent. My mother and father raised me since I was little, working around the clock. They paid more than me. How could I rejusted refuse/reject/deny them? Nowadays, I help my parents if they in are busy. Likewise, they help me if I have exam. One thing to bear in my mind, "The housework should be helping each other,  then it is really equal."

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