Writing a letter to a manager for taking vacations --part 1
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Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to you in regard with scheduling my vacations that I am planning. It's coming to the end of Jan., I would like to spend 7 days off work with my family if you could grant.
My husband and I have been extremely busy and exhausted on our settlement for 1 year without any vacations. Lately, we planned to travel in Taiwan for celebrating our 3-year anniversary marriage and stay the local resort. Therefore, I would like to take 7 days time off work during 24-30th of Jan. 2017.
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Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to you regarding an upcoming vacation that I am planning. It's coming to the end of January, which is when we will all have our Lunar New Year holiday, and I would like to spend 7 days off work with my family. As you know, my family is very important to me, so I do hope that you will grant this vacation.This past year, my husband and I have been extremely busy and exhausted; we haven't had a vacation in over a year. Recently, we both decided to travel in Taiwan to celebrate our 3rd marriage anniversary. I would like to take 7 days off work, from the 24th to 30th of Jan. 2017.
I understand how important the quality and consistency of my work is to you. Therefore earlier this week, I had a discussion about my work with Mr. George, and handed over the important projects to him. He says that he will be fine with taking care of them whilst I am away for a week. In the case of an unlikely emergency, Mr. George and yourself will be able to reach me via my telephone number: +886 905 527 566.
Thank you for your kind understanding. My family and I are really looking forward to this vacation, and I'm sure you know how it feels to spend quality time with your loved ones. I look forward to hearing from you soon!
Warmly,
Salus
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